Aloha to all my friends on MPS.
Unfortunately I am overloaded with work right now and will not be able to comment much. Will try to stop by every so often, maybe even post something (like today), but there is not much time right now for writing either. Once I am caught up I intend to become more active again. Just wanted to let you know so you don't get the idea I might not like your writing anymore! :-) I will still read as much as I can, but comment less.
Words silently hovering
Above unfinished sentences
Just out of reach
Ephemeral thoughts
Instantly gone
Never to be remembered
Lingering feelings
Barely recognizable
Inside the forest of moods
A hint of love
Without substantiation
Hiding forlornly
In dark basement corners
The empty mind
Floating serenely
Within nothingness
Conceived of nothingness
Faintly aware of
Perceived memories
Fading into oblivion
Drops joining the sea
Exquisite peace
Lovingly embraced
Utter surrender
Into a state of bliss
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Author:
Alfred Peyer (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 3rd, 2018 22:19
- Category: Reflection
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Comments8
Very good write Fred, may that bliss last forever.
I'll miss all your kind support but I realise you are still there turning out the odd brilliant write as you have done here. Hope you are able to return 'full time' soon.
A fine write Fred.
Will be missing you and your wonderful writing Fred - - meanwhile not to work too too hard - and come back soon. x
An ephemeral feel right through these lyrical words Fred - a soothing read on memory's ability to render its own state of bliss.
Bye for now Fred - make notes of all your ephemeral thoughts so you can fill us in when you get back!
Fred,
Another gem as only
you can write! Will miss
your sense of humor!
Don’t take too long to
come back! Be safe!
~Laura~
You never fail to stun.
Will be missed.
I understand though as work and moving home has consumed me for some past months. Hoping I won't have been forgotten.
Await your return.
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