The black rose
It comes and goes
Filling its bloom on saddened eyes
Taking tight hold of its earthy surround
Making its way to the heart broken ground
The black rose
It comes and goes
Opening to songs of yester times
Growing and writhing under the sun
Smouldering triumphantly, the love undone
The black rose
It comes and goes
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Author:
sweetpea (
Offline) - Published: March 6th, 2018 16:11
- Category: Love
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Comments2
WELCOME SWEETPEA (NICE NAME !) Thanks for your first Poem ! I love the structure ~ very elegant. Replete with Repetition ~ Rhyme and Rhythm ~ Excellent ~ more please. Truly BLACK ROSES are symbols of sadness & departure & broken hearts ~ so it is a fitting title for for your haunting Love Poem ~ Perfect ! Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
Thank you. All a bit new to me but I will indeed check out your poems.
Very good write SWEETPEA, Welcome to MPS and I hope to read more of your poems.
Thank you. I have to admit I fell upon the site - good fall 😊and no snow in sight. Loving all the poems
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