ELIJAH ~ (An Acrostic)

Laura🌻

Embodiment of a

Love so

Infectious and

Joyous and as

Amicable as

His mommy and daddy!

             ***************

Embodiment of a 

Love so

Young

  • Author: Laura🌻 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 11th, 2018 10:19
  • Comment from author about the poem: In honor of Mother’s Day in the UK, this acrostic poem is dedicated to Ely’s amazing mum! Happy Mother’s Day, LG!💐
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 72
  • Users favorite of this poem: Noah, ZIGGY
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  • orchidee

    A fine write Laura.

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    GRAZIE LAURA ~ AMICA MIA ~ Per una Poema molto fragrante ! LITTLE GIFT is a very beautiful and gifted Lady and a wonderful Mother. Thanks for your Tribute ! Tu e Una Angela ! Baci e Abbracci BRIAN XOX Please check my POEM ~ Grazie B.

    • Laura🌻

      Glad you liked it! LG is an awesome lady, I agree!

    • ZIGGY

      hi there I was never able for this style it used to fry my head lol, a VERY SWEET piece really liked the ending lines ''Embodiment of a
      Love so
      Young'',,,,,,zigs

      • Laura🌻

        Thank you, Zigs.

      • Michael Edwards

        Great form - great work Laura

        • Laura🌻

          Thank you, Michael!
          I appreciate your comment!

          ~Laura~

        • Lorna

          You made us love Eli Laura! Adorable!

          • Laura🌻

            Thank you, Lorna!
            I actually never met Ely!
            I have a sense of him by the way his mom speaks of him! Since yesterday was Mother’s Day in the UK, I decided to gift her with the poem about her son....the love of her life!

            ~Laura~

            • Lorna

              Awwwww.......

            • Gary Edward Geraci

              Spot on Laura; a fine family poem.

              • Laura🌻

                Thank you , Gary!

              • rrodriguez

                Elijah is my grandson's name. Acrostic was stupendous.

                • Laura🌻

                  Thank you, rr!
                  I’m so happy you liked the poem! Now it is really special...as special as your grandson!
                  Elijah is a beautiful name!
                  God Bless your grandson!

                  ~Laura~

                  • rrodriguez

                    Amen likewise.

                  • ron parrish aka wordman

                    and it is perfect,loved it

                    • Laura🌻

                      Thank you, for visiting and
                      commenting, Ron!

                    • ron parrish aka wordman

                      sweet sentiments

                    • Neville

                      Although not an expert, and maybe way too late.. I just wanna say Elijah is one hell of an acrostic

                    • Neville

                      No room for any misinterpretations here.. perfectly penned, appropriate methinks and true.... Nice one Laura Neville

                      • Laura🌻

                        Thank you, Neville!
                        The poem was dedicated to LG’s son!

                        • Neville

                          it was indeed lovely as indeed I hear he is....

                        • Fay Slimm.

                          What a wonderful tribute and as an acrostic it works so well and it will be treasured dear Laura.

                          • Laura🌻

                            Thank you for your wonderful comment, Fay! Very much appreciated!



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