LOVE RENEWED
In plenary states of disarray
with little favouring fortitude
they journeyed on with lonely thoughts
as distant cow bells rang.
They quietly spoke in tones of ease
and with unshakable esteem
by firm and natural impulses
their discomposure soon subdued.
With celibate discretion gone
they strayed from narrow trodden paths
the renascence of love once lost
renewed unseen in ecstasy.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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...and a wonderful painting too. So much to see. It's like the cosmos explained through emotions and I can't look away!
It's delightfully hypnotic!
Thanks Jamie - so pleased you like it.
Beautiful write Michael
An eloquent write and fine pic M. I might swoon if I look up some of them long words to find their full meaning!
You'll swoon again if you ponder on what they got up to when they left the narrow trodden paths.
Oohh, was they naughty? Did they fall by the wayside?!
They were in ecstasy Orchi
That ecstasy sounds swoony! Oohh should I meet them?!
Think you should but don't interrupt them - just wait on the narrow trodden path. Oh by the way put your wellies on - it's a bit muddy.
Pilgrims on their way to glory, sometimes up to mischief naughty............
The little devils - thanks Lorna.
Oh but for my youth back - where are my vitamin pills?
Youth - those days when vitamins pills were never needed.............
Touche` Lorna, Touche`!
Great write Michael.
Now this one sure is a thriller. It's like a roller coaster. It starts off slow, hits you with a slope, and then calms you down with a satisfactory conclusion. Very nice.
Thanks so much Nicholas - I really appreciate your kind comments.
wonderful poem Michael, the painting looks like a bouquet of beautiful flowers to me? ww
Spot on Willy - I later added a bow which brought the bouquet to life. Thanks for looking in.
Michael,
This is a beautiful write of the journey of a lifetime...as colorful as your painting! Enjoyed the read!
~Laura~
Ah... there is hope yet?
Thank you Michael
There sure is Andrew - just need those vitamin pills - and a good memory.
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