WAITING.....

Fay Slimm.

 

Waiting.......

 

If this place in which I write is owned as real
it seems odes and myself are two
sides of three faces.

Each word has its meaning and is part of a tale
which might well be translated as
trio-parsed phrases.

Out from my core I catch first breath of Muse
who since noting reaction warns
intent to relate.

Lipless the language that fills a blank canvas
as she bequeathes me semantics
before they escape.

Fancy, in guiding to other dimensions takes 
poetic minds as She knows the value
of space made for waiting.

 

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  • orchidee

    A fine write and pic Fay.

  • Lorna

    Beautiful description of the page waiting for your words Fay and you waiting for your muse! Perfect picture to go with it..........

    • Fay Slimm.

      Ah - many thanks Lorna.

    • Laura🌻

      A fantastic write, Fay!
      I love the entire poem and pic. However, if I had to choose my favorite lines, they would be...
      “Lipless the language that fills a blank canvas
      as she bequeaths me semantics before they escape.”
      AMAZING!!

      ~Laura~

      • Fay Slimm.

        Really pleased you liked that special line Laura - my thanks for your comments.

      • Christina8

        An absolutely fantastic poem Fay! I would have to agree with Laura on my favorite part. Just beautiful!

        • Fay Slimm.

          Bless you dear friend - your comments of support are always so welcome. Glad you enjoyed the read.

        • Accidental Poet

          My favorite part? From beginning to end. The page will always wait for the poet. Great write Fay.

          • Fay Slimm.

            Ha ha - bless you A.P. - and so pleased you enjoyed the posting on waiting.

          • Michael Edwards

            A lyrical write Fay.

            • Fay Slimm.

              Thanks a load Michael - - waiting is all part of the writing game eh ?

            • Goldfinch60

              Super write Fay, that space is waiting,

            • Poetic25

              fay

              A great piece of writing, truly in your style. Really like the story here.

              M:)

              • Fay Slimm.

                Thank you dear friend - glad you enjoyed the reasons for waiting I tried to give in this verse.

              • willyweed

                love the picture wonderful poem ww



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