Waiting.......
If this place in which I write is owned as real
it seems odes and myself are two
sides of three faces.
Each word has its meaning and is part of a tale
which might well be translated as
trio-parsed phrases.
Out from my core I catch first breath of Muse
who since noting reaction warns
intent to relate.
Lipless the language that fills a blank canvas
as she bequeathes me semantics
before they escape.
Fancy, in guiding to other dimensions takes
poetic minds as She knows the value
of space made for waiting.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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A fine write and pic Fay.
Thanks Orchi.
Beautiful description of the page waiting for your words Fay and you waiting for your muse! Perfect picture to go with it..........
Ah - many thanks Lorna.
A fantastic write, Fay!
I love the entire poem and pic. However, if I had to choose my favorite lines, they would be...
“Lipless the language that fills a blank canvas
as she bequeaths me semantics before they escape.”
AMAZING!!
~Laura~
Really pleased you liked that special line Laura - my thanks for your comments.
An absolutely fantastic poem Fay! I would have to agree with Laura on my favorite part. Just beautiful!
Bless you dear friend - your comments of support are always so welcome. Glad you enjoyed the read.
A lyrical write Fay.
Thanks a load Michael - - waiting is all part of the writing game eh ?
Super write Fay, that space is waiting,
fay
A great piece of writing, truly in your style. Really like the story here.
M:)
Thank you dear friend - glad you enjoyed the reasons for waiting I tried to give in this verse.
love the picture wonderful poem ww
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