Not nice getting old
As no one seems to care
I shuffle around my flat
Slippers worse for wear
I am a little bit lonely
Even though I have a cat
I am always talking to her
Only wish she would talk back
When someone knocks on my door
Maybe this time I will have a chat
Never seem to make it on time
They have gone, and I shuffle back
I wave from my window
To people walking by
Not many people wave back
Shame really, I wonder why?
Sometimes I go for bus rides
But everyone is on their phone
Nobody seems to talk anymore
So Yes I do feel alone
I know it is the way we now live
So trust has certainly gone
I really must stop moaning now
Time for that cuppa, nice and strong
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Author:
Elaine (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Thinking how much the world has changed to an older person
- Category: Sad
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- Users favorite of this poem: Noah, bonitalunita, Lorna.
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Comments4
Sad write KItcat but I can understand how this is, the art of speaking to each other is lost in this modern world.
Good write and welcome to MPS.
First of all thank you for welcoming me 🙂 And thank you for your lovely comment
I too like strong tea!
Good on ya me too
Brilliant! Sad but not self-pitying........ love it.............
Hi Lorna
Thank you for your lovely comment 🙂
THANKS ELAINE ~ For your first POEM ~ A GEM ! Love you sense of FUN and that you can laugh at your self ~ remember 66 is the new 40 ~ so shed you slippers get your high heels on and get out there and DANCE ! Pleased you got some comments from two of the nicest people on MPS ! You will never be lonely again on this site if you keep posting POEMS and commenting on other's Odes. That's how MPS works and you can build up a CIRCLE of Friends ~ Love to be your FIRST ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my POEMS !
Hi Brian
Thank you again for your lovely comments
This poem isn't me, I just try and get into an older persons feelings about our modern days
I love computers I have even fixed a few in the past for friends, and smartphones
Hmmm 66 does sound old well it is really, but again you made it sound good by saying its the new 40 bless you, Oh I just danced around the room with a huge smile
That was lovely to hear about the comments from the two nicest people on here, I hope I can keep up with posting poems, and of course I will read lots of other poems on here and leave comments, be really nice to gain a lovely circle of friends
This does seem like a lovely site to be on, and so pleased I have joined
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