Mile-High Amour.
Book me for no one-night Love flight,
sky-heights only serve to bolster my girlish reserve
as quick-flings to me never looked right.
I need no Mile-High incentive,
no pill or potion or passenger-brews for emotion
that makes me more passion-attentive.
Force me to use no fore-play things
amusing as toys but only to sort the men from boys
and causing gross misunderstandings.
My amour-taste is plainly for straight,
no chains or spankings make me comply, frankly
nothing could teach me to tease or bait.
Find me a Club that puts Love first
where tenderness renders me fit for surrender
for then I never need any rehearsal.
Winging replete to another plane
with feet grounded by desire's earthy sounds
soars me to bliss again and again.
Show me dimensions where soul
contacts heart and breaks records for more
reasons than only few moments.
Mile-High one-flight guys who like
such delights never quench my kind of thirst,
this girl prefers long-term love life.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: March 26th, 2018 02:27
- Comment from author about the poem: Hope you enjoy this Monday Fun-Write..............
- Category: Humor
- Views: 29
- Users favorite of this poem: Lorna, Laura🌻.
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loving your flight of love for the metaphor in you work her. Loved it from start till the end.
Ah - - glad you enjoyed the Monday fun-write Kevin - - tis always a pleasure to receive your supportive comments.
Just brilliant Fay - a lot of tenderness behind the humour.
Pleased you saw through the banter dear Michael and that you enjoyed my Monday fun-write.
Very nice, Fay. I really enjoyed the "Find me a Club that puts Love first" line.
You caught the most important line in this verse dear W.C. - thank you so much for your comment.
She having fun there? Should I try this? Will I only faint?! heehee.
Yes you might well faint up there in the sky on a love-flight dear Orchi - - thanks for the comment.
Phenomenal Fay! Love the thoughts especially weeding the men from the boys, the truth from the fake..... perfect construction. Wow......
Ha -- - so pleased you enjoyed my Monday fun-write dear Lorna - - thanks a load for your lovely comment.
Very good write Fay and so true. True love is the way to go.
Yes =- -I am glad you saw the truth behind the stanzas and lines dear Goldi -- there is nothing to beat long-lasting love eh ?
it could be said there are those of us who need to be in orbit for quite some time before we can dock in space .... so much debris out there to be avoided
Too true dear friend - - am so glad you enjoyed the piece.
A super-duper of a write, Fay!
I definitely concur with all the comments made thus far!
I’m with you all the way about love and tenderness!
“Show me dimensions where soul contacts heart...”, is one of my favorite lines!
A delightful read! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
So grateful for not only your visit but for the time you spent on this perceptive comment dear Laura - - - - thank you indeed for your thoughts on this subject.
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