TOGETHERNESS.

Fay Slimm.

 

 

TOGETHERNESS.


All night love's tender battle yields first to one
then to the other's needy palette.

Our bliss becomes married.

Endless the march between take and give
as desire roams flesh and twin-towered passion
jousts for success.

How sweet our togetherness.

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 5th, 2018 03:33
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 31
  • User favorite of this poem: Laura🌻.
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Comments7

  • Laura🌻

    I love this poem, my dear Fay!
    It’s so beautifully written! It flows like liquid gold! Metaphorically rich...a delightful read!

    ~Laura~

    • Fay Slimm.

      My thanks for this eloquent comment on the brief poem where love came and stayed - - so pleased you like the read dear Laura.

    • Goldfinch60

      Togetherness is so wonderful and it shows in this very good write.

      • Fay Slimm.

        I agree that togetherness can never be beaten Goldi - - thank you for for the read and comment.

      • Karoline

        This is lovely 😊

        • Fay Slimm.

          Thank you Karoline - so pleased you found the read so enjoyable.

        • orchidee

          All-together a good write Fay!

          • Fay Slimm.

            Love this clever usage of the word in the title and glad you found the write so good Orchi.

          • Michael Edwards

            Ah sweet - great one Fay

            • Fay Slimm.

              Many thanks Michael for seeing the fanciful stages of love in these short lines.

            • ron parrish aka wordman

              sweet thoughts fay

            • Lorna

              Delightful Fay! And may they always be together and not like the "twin towers" that came tumbling down.......



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