TOGETHERNESS.
All night love's tender battle yields first to one
then to the other's needy palette.
Our bliss becomes married.
Endless the march between take and give
as desire roams flesh and twin-towered passion
jousts for success.
How sweet our togetherness.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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I love this poem, my dear Fay!
It’s so beautifully written! It flows like liquid gold! Metaphorically rich...a delightful read!
~Laura~
My thanks for this eloquent comment on the brief poem where love came and stayed - - so pleased you like the read dear Laura.
Togetherness is so wonderful and it shows in this very good write.
I agree that togetherness can never be beaten Goldi - - thank you for for the read and comment.
This is lovely 😊
Thank you Karoline - so pleased you found the read so enjoyable.
All-together a good write Fay!
Love this clever usage of the word in the title and glad you found the write so good Orchi.
Ah sweet - great one Fay
Many thanks Michael for seeing the fanciful stages of love in these short lines.
sweet thoughts fay
Delightful Fay! And may they always be together and not like the "twin towers" that came tumbling down.......
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