The Warp and the Weft

Lorna



The wind shifts in the loom of the sky

Propelled back and forth the pick flies

The past present and future

One warp thread

One weft thread 

Repeated

Until we poor weavers have completed the cloth

There is no unpicking of time

The finished work stands when we fall

Our lives defined in woven lines

  • Author: Lorna (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 8th, 2018 05:05
  • Category: Reflection
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  • Eugene S.

    Well said and profound. Love it. I can see that as the beginning of a truly epic story.

    • Lorna

      You take it from here Eugene!

    • Laura🌻

      Lorna,
      You’ve beautifully woven this piece of writing! It will withstand till the end of time! Awesome...I like it a lot! I agree with AP...a great write, quote, and song choice!

      ~Laura~

      • Lorna

        Thank you Laura........little Cyndi has certainly grown up! Remember her when her hair stood on end and she was all colors of the rainbow! It was a hard choice - the older or younger version? Now she sings this with great emotion since she probably knows more about loss........

        • Laura🌻

          Yes, I remember the girl from Astoria, Queens! She’s something else! I loved her then and I love her now! Have you seen Kinky Boots? Her music for this play is phenomenal!

          • Lorna

            Oh I love Kinky Boots! I only saw the movie but just loved - so much fun. Didn't know she wrote the music - makes me want to see it again.....

          • orchidee

            A fine write Lorna. You warping or wefting just now?!

            • Lorna

              I'm huffing and puffing....... stuck my nose outside to see if it had warmed up enough to go out and rake but I'll wait a few more hours.........

            • Fay Slimm.

              A gem of a read about time allotted for weaving what we ourselves turn out to be - - expertly formed and woven Lorna.

              • Lorna

                Happy Sunday Fay - thank you!

              • Michael Edwards

                There is no unpicking of time - great line in a super write Lorna.

                • Lorna

                  Ta Michael.......

                • RiverJordan

                  delicately stupendous!

                  • Lorna

                    I've never been stupendous before! Thank you!

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Very good write Lorna, time is endless.



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