CONCEDING.

Fay Slimm.

 

 

Conceding.

 

An ink-toned ebony night captures
sound and takes from stillness quiet rapture.

Emerging now sparkling gem-stars
lend diamond brightness to penetrate dark.

And surging toward me while I lie
powerless God-'shine embraces my mind.

Consciously losing track of time, way
past heaven's far height I fall up into space.

I taste nova's signs while thick black
velvet becomes holed as I digest the galaxy.

Grief could not console me but love's
feel holds divine secrets of assured proof.

One with the cosmos I shall now stop
as conceding to mystery fear has been lost.

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 13th, 2018 08:23
  • Comment from author about the poem: A re-post of a poem that wrote of coping with grief after sudden loss - - - this has been requested. Hope you enjoy.
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Comments5

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    Thanks for posting FAY and thanks for your comment which explains why this Poem is out of phase with your recent muses ! When one suffers a sudden loss ~ committing ones feelings to Poetry can be very cathartic ~ and I am sure this one was ! When we suddenly lose someone close ~ time & tide stop and we find ourselves in "griefs limbo". This feeling ~ which I share (accidental death of a Brother @ 16) is perfectly expressed in your requiem ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Love the visual ~ Yours as always BRIAN

  • orchidee

    A fine write Fay. Mmm velvety galaxy chocolate! Erm, not quite the theme of this poem, Orchi. lol.

  • Michael Edwards

    I can see why it was requested - fine work Fay.

  • Lorna

    Your last stanza is wonderful Fay (as is the rest) - but that reminded me that when someone dies we mourn but also feel fear about our own death....so "conceding to mystery fear has been lost" is a gift we hopefully come to.

  • lasergraph

    Repost are great and bring work to some that may have missed its first appearance. Coping with grief can be difficult and I myself find poetry to be a good tool to help. Thanks for giving us another look.



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