(c) 2018 Edward York
We were all on board as we set sail,
All crowded on the deck.
Looking back I still can't think,
What may have caused the wreck.
The water was a little rough,
But no more than in the past.
The bow just pushed its way ahead,
Perhaps a bit too fast.
The saltwater spray, gave us a bath,
The sky was dark and gray.
The lighthouse in the distance,
Could barely show the way.
Eventually the storm did pass,
The clouds faded away.
The sunshine filled up the sky,
And the seagull came to play.
Relationships are much the same,
When our nerves begin to fray.
If we can just weather the storm,
It will finally go away.
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Author:
lasergraph (
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Comments5
Very nice and with a positive message.
Thank you. I will let the media dabble in the negative stuff.
A fine write laser.
Thank you, much appreciated
Another great poem, laser! Love the positive message.
We need more positives in our lives
Laser,
I agree with Christina about your poem and its message!
Also, I was reminded of a poem I once read to my children, “Whether The Weather Be Fine”!
So far, we are weathering the weather!
~Laura~
Glad to hear you are surviving just fine. We all have our storms, but they are usually temporary.
Thank goodness for that!
Good write with a positive end.
The positive generates more smiles.
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