The sails on my little boat are luffing
You are the wind that always filled them
Yours was the compass I looked to
Yours the direction I steered by
If the wind is dying slowly
The voyage coming to an end
Before you go
Raise the wind again
Fill the sails enough
To keep my little boat afloat
- Author: Lorna ( Offline)
- Published: April 30th, 2018 05:04
- Comment from author about the poem: Picture reminds me of Michael's artwork.............
- Category: Reflection
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- Users favorite of this poem: marlenawood, Laura🌻
Comments7
May the wind be always in your sails Lorna.
Thanks Andy.......
This poem is 'floating my boat', as they say!
And you'll huff and you'll puff Orchi? I'm glad you like!
Thanks for sharing LORNA ~ Cool Picture ~ Melancholy Song ~ Sad Poem ! LUFFING is a cool word and something I have often done in Lake Sailing where the wind iv very unpredictable ! "Steering close to catch the wind in your sails".
When we are losing someone close we can reflect on the effect of their presence in nautical terms as in many songs ! They are the "Wind in our Sails" and the "Compass to direct us" ! In my experience ~ the sad thing is ~ when they've gone ~ their support & guidance goes with them. We must cherish our Mentors while we still have them ! Every Blessing BRIAN ! Please check my Poem & Fusion ~ Thanks B ! Please check my Poem & Fusion ~ Thanks B !
This is a wonderful write!
Glad you like LRP!
I absolutely love this Lorna and I'll have to start posting my artwork for you all to see. Much love
Oh yes please! We'd love to see M!
Lorna,
I have a feeling your sails will forever be filled to keep your little boat afloat!
I sense through your writings that you’re a very strong individual with a great sense of humor that will rise above any adversity thrown your way!
~Laura~
Brilliant metaphor! A simple but powerful poem. Life, boats, wind , and sails; simple things that express a sadness and a hope. Terrific poem. - Phil A.
So glad you like it Phil.........
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