The Soft and Broken Heart

Who's heart is that?

I think I know

Its owner is quite and sad though. Has been through a lot. It really is a tale of woe, I watch her cry. While he didn't see that she gave him everything He gave her heart a shake and made her sobbed until there were no more tears The only other sound's she heard that night, was the sound of her own heartbreaking. While she lied on her bed crying quietly in the night. The soft fragile heart finally is broken, one night and she said it was enough. She had gone through enough pain. She finally realized that the promises he promised to keep, had been broken from the start. Now she is free of a darkness that everyone blames her for getting herself into.Only if they knew what he really did to her. Now he is the one that cannot sleep through the night. He lies in bed weeping finally realizing what he had lost. An angel that tried to save him from his own Darkness. Now he rises from his bitter bed, with thoughts of sadness in his head, he idolizes being dead. What he forgets is so did she Did to every day in their relationship, he was nothing but poison and he did nothing to try to fix it. While she did everything to make him happy, to save him. Now he faces the days without her feeling never-ending dread like she did. Like she did.


Like she did.



  • Theta the scholar

    Great poem, don't beat yourself to hard give yourself time to heal and catch your breath for time heals everything welcome to the site.

    • Kat18

      thanks its been a year and I got with someone else and they broke my heart. but I'm really trying to heal from both relationships.

      • Theta the scholar

        Time does everything well very nice first poem

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ Elegantly written ~ but with a sad and sentimental content ! I'm in a loving relationship ~ engaged to ANGELA and hoe to be married when the time is right for both of us ! I'm 34 so I'm old enough to have fallen in and out of LOVE several times so I can empathise ! Sometimes it hurts so much that you just want to die and paradoxically your ex-Partner is suffering as well ! My MANTRA (because I have learned something from every relationship) is "Better to have Loved & Lost than never to have Loved at all" however from experience I know this is an easier Mantra for Men than Ladies ! Thanks for sharing ~ every Blessing for the future ~ Please check my POEMS ~ thanks BRIAN (UK)

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