If I could tell you all my secrets
and all my fondest memories
then we may or may not be friends
I know, I'm such a tease!
Seriously, moments that take
your breath away are so few
But they are prized and remembered
like a love that is still new*
I've already lived such a full life
But all the secrets and memories are mine
I've only shared them with a few
The rest will go with me to the Divine
- Author: Christina (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: May 1st, 2018 12:47
- Comment from author about the poem: *Even love that has been around a while can take your breath away. :-)
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 30
Comments8
Love and memories and memories of love, bittersweet and just sweet alike have their own wonders! lovely poem.
Thanks for the compliment Azura! Pleased to meet you!
you expressed it
perfectly.
Thank you onepauly, I do appreciate it!
Oohh you're a tease - and I would swoon, if I heard it all, I bet! heehee.
Yes, Steve, you would swoon! Thank you!
Thanks CHRISTINA ~ It's what we don't know about PEOPLE that makes them interesting & intriguing ! On a POETRY site like MPS we accidentally (or otherwise ?) drop snippets of our lives which ameliorates the dialogue and keeps us interested and commenting ! I try to answer direct questions (as you know) but reserve the right to say NO ! I only know a little about ANGELA but what I do know keeps me in LOVE and our Knowledge of each other (and Love for each other) grows every day. This is true on MPS and I am glad there is a cohort (12 or so) with whom I comment and vice-versa ! I know some well enough to have the temerity to dedicate a Poem too or to collaborate on a Poem with ! Also some like FAY who we can all learn from ! For me FAY is the BEST POET on MPS ~ perfection. Thanks for your intriguing poem ~ it has made us all think Tus Hermanos Amorados ~ Brian y Angela @@@@@@@
Thanks for your in depth reply! I really appreciate the time you take to answer back. 🙂 Sister Christina
Your secrets are yours to keep until you decide to let one or two out with whom you choose. My secret? No one in my family, friends and co-workers know that I write poetry. I used to have a best friend who knew, but I could read his thoughts and we are no longer friends at all. I value respect in my friends, which is why I'm here on MPS.
Thanks for letting me in your little secret! 🙂 i appreciate your thoughts on my poem.
Very well written, we all have hidden secrets that mean so much to us and will be with us as we go into eternity.
Thanks Andy, I appreciate the compliment!
Some things you just can't risk telling for fear of being misunderstood or nullified by others... best to keep the "best" little moments for oneself I think.
I agree! Thanks for your comments...appreciated very much!
Such a lovely poem, love is amazing to feel and remember(currently love struck by some girl), keep up the good work christina
-Theta
Thanks so much Theta! Being in love in so much fun whether it's new or it's been years!
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