Christina8

Moments

If I could tell you all my secrets

and all my fondest memories

then we may or may not be friends

I know, I'm such a tease!

 

Seriously, moments that take

your breath away are so few

But they are prized and remembered

like a love that is still new*

 

I've already lived such a full life

But all the secrets and memories are mine

I've only shared them with a few

The rest will go with me to the Divine

Comments8

  • Azura Nightsong

    Love and memories and memories of love, bittersweet and just sweet alike have their own wonders! lovely poem.

    • Christina8

      Thanks for the compliment Azura! Pleased to meet you!

    • onepauly

      you expressed it
      perfectly.

      • Christina8

        Thank you onepauly, I do appreciate it!

      • orchidee

        Oohh you're a tease - and I would swoon, if I heard it all, I bet! heehee.

        • Christina8

          Yes, Steve, you would swoon! Thank you!

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          Thanks CHRISTINA ~ It's what we don't know about PEOPLE that makes them interesting & intriguing ! On a POETRY site like MPS we accidentally (or otherwise ?) drop snippets of our lives which ameliorates the dialogue and keeps us interested and commenting ! I try to answer direct questions (as you know) but reserve the right to say NO ! I only know a little about ANGELA but what I do know keeps me in LOVE and our Knowledge of each other (and Love for each other) grows every day. This is true on MPS and I am glad there is a cohort (12 or so) with whom I comment and vice-versa ! I know some well enough to have the temerity to dedicate a Poem too or to collaborate on a Poem with ! Also some like FAY who we can all learn from ! For me FAY is the BEST POET on MPS ~ perfection. Thanks for your intriguing poem ~ it has made us all think Tus Hermanos Amorados ~ Brian y Angela @@@@@@@

          • Christina8

            Thanks for your in depth reply! I really appreciate the time you take to answer back. :-) Sister Christina

          • Accidental Poet

            Your secrets are yours to keep until you decide to let one or two out with whom you choose. My secret? No one in my family, friends and co-workers know that I write poetry. I used to have a best friend who knew, but I could read his thoughts and we are no longer friends at all. I value respect in my friends, which is why I'm here on MPS.

            • Christina8

              Thanks for letting me in your little secret! :-) i appreciate your thoughts on my poem.

            • Goldfinch60

              Very well written, we all have hidden secrets that mean so much to us and will be with us as we go into eternity.

              • Christina8

                Thanks Andy, I appreciate the compliment!

              • Lorna

                Some things you just can't risk telling for fear of being misunderstood or nullified by others... best to keep the "best" little moments for oneself I think.

                • Christina8

                  I agree! Thanks for your comments...appreciated very much!

                • Theta the scholar

                  Such a lovely poem, love is amazing to feel and remember(currently love struck by some girl), keep up the good work christina
                  -Theta

                  • Christina8

                    Thanks so much Theta! Being in love in so much fun whether it's new or it's been years!



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