BRIAN & ANGELA

NAMING OF THE EXTERNAL BODY PARTS ~ LINKED HAIKU



 

 

HANDS ~ TACTILE ~ LOVING

they make us all so MANUAL

a Human blessing !

 

FEET ~ so neglected !

essential for walking ~ and

keeping us upright

We are BIPEDAL

LOCOMOTERS not ARBOUR

BRACHIATORS !

 

ARMS & LEGS ~ useful

levers ~ attaching Hands and

Feet to the BODY !

 

Eyes ~ Ears ~ Nose & Mouth 

determine how we look to

others ~ BEAUTIFUL !

 

HAIR ~ Female Glory 

Man ? Sign of Virility

or Senility ?

 

PRIVATE PARTS ~ Female ?

hidden and mysterious

Male ? Much too DANGLY !

 

Thanks for listening ~ comments welcome ~ BRIAN XOX

 

You only get ONE BODY and it is designed to last

100 Years ! Care for it & protect it at all times ~

The internal Human Body will be featured tomorrow !

Comments8

  • Cinderella_Pixie

    Your Haiku is amazing i never did get the hang of writing those.

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      Thanks PIXIE ~ Loved your Poem TOO ! Basically an ENGLISH HAIKU should be about NATURE and has 17 syllables (arranged in three lines 5 7 5) and normally does not rhyme " An example is SPRING

      SPRING ~ perfect season
      flowers & birds & bees ~ and
      of course ~ Lots of Love !

      Hope that encourages you to try ONE
      Your Friend ~ BRIAN

    • orchidee

      A fine write Brian, and swoony at the end! heehee.

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Thanks STEVE ~ A careful use of language kept this poem out of the "18" zones ! Thanks for your comment ~ BRIAN

        • orchidee

          Thanks Brian. You were discreet. I would be barking as an 18+ watchdog otherwise! lol.

        • Michael Edwards

          A great form and well written. Puts me in mind of one of my favourite poems: Today We Have Naming Of Parts

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            HI MIKE ~ missed you this week ! Pleased you liked the POEM ~ Haiku (5 7 5) are a challenge but better in clusters and always a pleasure ! My title was influenced by the "War Poem" "Today we have the Naming of Parts" and epic Poem ! Yours BRIAN

          • marlenawood

            I love this as much as I love anatomy wow amazingly wrote love

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              THANKS MARLENA ~ Pleased you liked it ! Human Anatomy & Physiology & Psychology is the ultimate subject ! Aspects of which I teach to my Vocational Students (Pre-nursing ~ Health & Beauty ~ Catering etc) ~ Love BRIAN !

            • Laura

              Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
              Grazie per la tua poesia!
              Thank you for your great haiku!
              I enjoyed the song! I wish I had that song to play when I taught seven year olds...quite a while ago! Looking forward to tomorrow’s posting!
              Abbracci e Baci per te ed Angela...
              ~Laura~

              • BRIAN & ANGELA

                GRAZIE LAURA ~ Nosra Cara Amica ~ Yes the song is great and I got a copy for all my Lady Friends who teach PRIMARIES ! Pleased you enjoyed it ! Still working on tomorrow's Poem but should be FUN ! Abbracci e Baci di ANGELA y BRIAN XOXOX

              • Maxine Smith

                So much I could learn from you Brian, this is brilliant, I very much enjoyed.

                • BRIAN & ANGELA

                  THANKS MAXINE ~ I have majored in Human Biology & Biochemistry so it was a pleasure to share ! Pleased you enjoyed it ! I'm going INTERNAL TOMORROW ~ watch this space ! Blessings ~ BRIAN

                • Theta the scholar

                  Anatomy class was today did not know i forgot my pencil and notebook, Good write jokes aside, Keep it up Brians
                  -Theta

                  • BRIAN & ANGELA

                    Thanks THETA ~ MPS has many purposes ~ To: Entertain ~ Inform ~ Shock ~ Amaze ~ Influence ~ Teach ~ Describe ~ Educate ~ Comfort etc etc ~ We have to be "open minded" and "open eyed" to fully enjoy ! Pleased you appreciated it ~ I'm going INTERNAL tomorrow ~ Yours BRIAN !

                  • Christina8

                    Great job Brian! I heard the less hair a man has on his head the more testosterone is in his bloodstream, making him more virile. True? Anyway, great linked haiku! Hugs to you and Angela

                    • BRIAN & ANGELA

                      THANKS CHRIS ~ I have lots of MALE FRIENDS (under 50 !) who are NATURALLY or SHAVED bald headed ! They all claim that the energy involved in growing HEAD HAIR (a few of them have beards !) is redirected to virility ~ take YUL BRUNNER as an example ! However not all their (female) Partners agree. Pleased you enjoyed the Poem (linked Haiku) ~ Pic & Song Hugs back at ya ! BRIAN & ANGELA ~ Internal organs tomorrow ~ OK



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