HANDS ~ TACTILE ~ LOVING
they make us all so MANUAL
a Human blessing !
FEET ~ so neglected !
essential for walking ~ and
keeping us upright
We are BIPEDAL
LOCOMOTERS not ARBOUR
BRACHIATORS !
ARMS & LEGS ~ useful
levers ~ attaching Hands and
Feet to the BODY !
Eyes ~ Ears ~ Nose & Mouth
determine how we look to
others ~ BEAUTIFUL !
HAIR ~ Female Glory
Man ? Sign of Virility
or Senility ?
PRIVATE PARTS ~ Female ?
hidden and mysterious
Male ? Much too DANGLY !
Thanks for listening ~ comments welcome ~ BRIAN XOX
You only get ONE BODY and it is designed to last
100 Years ! Care for it & protect it at all times ~
The internal Human Body will be featured tomorrow !
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Your Haiku is amazing i never did get the hang of writing those.
Thanks PIXIE ~ Loved your Poem TOO ! Basically an ENGLISH HAIKU should be about NATURE and has 17 syllables (arranged in three lines 5 7 5) and normally does not rhyme " An example is SPRING
SPRING ~ perfect season
flowers & birds & bees ~ and
of course ~ Lots of Love !
Hope that encourages you to try ONE
Your Friend ~ BRIAN
A fine write Brian, and swoony at the end! heehee.
Thanks STEVE ~ A careful use of language kept this poem out of the "18" zones ! Thanks for your comment ~ BRIAN
Thanks Brian. You were discreet. I would be barking as an 18+ watchdog otherwise! lol.
A great form and well written. Puts me in mind of one of my favourite poems: Today We Have Naming Of Parts
HI MIKE ~ missed you this week ! Pleased you liked the POEM ~ Haiku (5 7 5) are a challenge but better in clusters and always a pleasure ! My title was influenced by the "War Poem" "Today we have the Naming of Parts" and epic Poem ! Yours BRIAN
I love this as much as I love anatomy wow amazingly wrote love
THANKS MARLENA ~ Pleased you liked it ! Human Anatomy & Physiology & Psychology is the ultimate subject ! Aspects of which I teach to my Vocational Students (Pre-nursing ~ Health & Beauty ~ Catering etc) ~ Love BRIAN !
Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Grazie per la tua poesia!
Thank you for your great haiku!
I enjoyed the song! I wish I had that song to play when I taught seven year olds...quite a while ago! Looking forward to tomorrowās posting!
Abbracci e Baci per te ed Angela...
~Laura~
GRAZIE LAURA ~ Nosra Cara Amica ~ Yes the song is great and I got a copy for all my Lady Friends who teach PRIMARIES ! Pleased you enjoyed it ! Still working on tomorrow's Poem but should be FUN ! Abbracci e Baci di ANGELA y BRIAN XOXOX
Anatomy class was today did not know i forgot my pencil and notebook, Good write jokes aside, Keep it up Brians
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Thanks THETA ~ MPS has many purposes ~ To: Entertain ~ Inform ~ Shock ~ Amaze ~ Influence ~ Teach ~ Describe ~ Educate ~ Comfort etc etc ~ We have to be "open minded" and "open eyed" to fully enjoy ! Pleased you appreciated it ~ I'm going INTERNAL tomorrow ~ Yours BRIAN !
Great job Brian! I heard the less hair a man has on his head the more testosterone is in his bloodstream, making him more virile. True? Anyway, great linked haiku! Hugs to you and Angela
THANKS CHRIS ~ I have lots of MALE FRIENDS (under 50 !) who are NATURALLY or SHAVED bald headed ! They all claim that the energy involved in growing HEAD HAIR (a few of them have beards !) is redirected to virility ~ take YUL BRUNNER as an example ! However not all their (female) Partners agree. Pleased you enjoyed the Poem (linked Haiku) ~ Pic & Song Hugs back at ya ! BRIAN & ANGELA ~ Internal organs tomorrow ~ OK
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