Broken Cup

Jabberwocky

 

I poured all my water

into a cup with a hole.

In the end it was empty

and so was I.

  • Author: Jabberwocky (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 2nd, 2018 03:40
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Michael Edwards

    Enigmatic piece - love it.

  • Goldfinch60

    That cup can be repaired to hold your life.

    • Jabberwocky

      Thanks! The cup can't be repaired but I can pour elsewhere 🙂

    • Lorna

      Love this simple one J.......

      • Jabberwocky

        Thanks 🙂
        I'm thinking now the last line should be
        "and I am still full"
        I'm usually more sure.
        Sometimes I post too fast lol!

        • Lorna

          Well either one is good - but "and I am still full" is more hopeful!

          • Jabberwocky

            Lol
            Wouldn't want that!
            In some ways yes it is, in some ways not.
            I'll sleep on it 🙂



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