I poured all my water
into a cup with a hole.
In the end it was empty
and so was I.
- Author: Jabberwocky ( Offline)
- Published: May 2nd, 2018 03:40
- Category: Unclassified
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I poured all my water
into a cup with a hole.
In the end it was empty
and so was I.
Comments3
Enigmatic piece - love it.
That cup can be repaired to hold your life.
Thanks! The cup can't be repaired but I can pour elsewhere 🙂
Love this simple one J.......
Thanks 🙂
I'm thinking now the last line should be
"and I am still full"
I'm usually more sure.
Sometimes I post too fast lol!
Well either one is good - but "and I am still full" is more hopeful!
Lol
Wouldn't want that!
In some ways yes it is, in some ways not.
I'll sleep on it 🙂
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