NAMING OF OUR INTERNAL ORGANS ~ A Dodeca Laudatio (12 Line Eulogy)



Your BRAIN is situated in your HEAD

Take good care of it ~ when it's gone you're DEAD !


Your LUNGS ~ they add OXYGEN to your BLOOD

Your HEART pumps round BLOOD VESSELS ~ treat it good !


We eat to live ~ we also live to eat

Our STOMACHS can digest each tasty treat !


Our KIDNEYS filter BLOOD ~ removing waste

Which we excrete as pee ~ Seniors in haste !


Our LIVER stores "food" to keep us in the groove

MUSCLES & SKELETON ~ help us to MOVE !


Some SEXY MEN ~ seductive ~ destructive

LADIES are positive ~ REPRODUCTIVE !


Thanks for dissecting ~ comments welcome ~ Love BRIAN XOX


In the 21st Century we teach Children all about their

Internal Organs and how to care for them.  Drink plenty

of water to flush the system and eat sensibly to get the

right balance of Carbs ~ Protein ~ Fats ~ Minerals and

Vitamins. Parents have a big responsibility for Children's

Diets and Exercise Programme and Schools also have a

big part to play with Holistic Education  Body ~ Mind ~

Spirit. As ADULTS (18+) we must take responsibility to

care for our BODIES ~ Inside & Out ~ Thanks BRIAN XOX   




  • orchidee

    A fine write Brian. I never knew some people's mouths were in their head, cos some talk out of their ****. heehee.


      Thanks STEVE ~ I have met a few who are ANALLY ORAL ! We are wonderfully and fearfully made ! If our noses were upside down (think about it !) every time it rained we'd get full of water and every time we sneezed we'd blow our hat off ! However some Men do have their BRAINS in their B*L*S ! Thanks for you comment ~ BRIAN

      • Michael Edwards

        And some who are orally anal :)

        Another fine write Brian - keep 'em coming.

      • Christina8

        Another fine write, this is great performance poetry! Great comment at the end. Hugs--Christina

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          THANKS CHRIS ~ Pleased you liked it ~ did it make you nostalgic for the WARD ? I love Human Biology it should be a key subject in every School ! My end comment a "Word to the Wise" ! Mega Hugs ~ Angela & Brian @@@@@@@

        • Maxine Smith

          Fabulous, another educational read. Enjoyable, fun, interesting and brilliant Brian. Well done.

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            Thanks MAXINE ~ Education should be fun and learning enjoyable ~ especially SCIENCE ! Pleased you enjoyed it ~ Hugs BRIAN @@@

          • Laura

            Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
            Una bella scrittura del nostro corpo!
            A very informative piece!
            I enjoyed it very much! Your students are very lucky to have you as their teacher!
            Abbracci e Baci per te ed Angela...

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              CAIO LAURA ~ Nostra Cara Amica ! Si nostri corpi sono molti importanti ! Pleased you enjoyed it ~ Yes all my students enjoy my LESSONS ~ especially Human Biology ! Abbracci e Baci e Amore ~ Angela e Brian XOXOX

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