Love's Tune.
Love, blind to weakness,
sees only the perfect
but shadows cast images
that sully its song.
Judgement, sans mercy,
creates but disturbance
ends hard-won harmony
which is love's due.
We, what we are receive
notes proving discord
but love's tune composes
much more than music.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A few thoughts on love's depth after reading the above quote.
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Beautiful sentiments Fay
Love's tune composes more than music - just lovely !!
I knows you LOVES my singing really M. lol.
Oh I do - I just switched on the dishwasher and thought of you straight away Orchi.
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Aww, why some say they rather not hear me sing? And why they say they can't tell if it's me singing or two cats fighting? heehee. A fine write Fay. Some people we 'can't stand them'. We may not LIKE them, but can LOVE them hopefully. Same as with my singing!
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ Thanks for sharing ! We are on the same wavelength today ~ Please check LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ~ Thanks BRIAN & ANGELA
Oscar Wilde had a beautiful heart I think. He has more memorable quotes than anyone I can think of.... that song that we hear (if we're lucky) is a lone one in a world of shrieks....
Thanks, Fay. Your words really resonated with me!
No one else sees what the lover sees and, with its own beguiling charm each oddness/strangeness/'dischord' can create within us a unique cherished value which bonds us closer to our special someone.
Binging home the marvel of the oft heard words 'i dont know what you seen in him/her'.
Love's tune indeed. I loved this.
Glad you found that final line pleasing Michael - - thanks for your encouraging comment too.
MY APOLOGIES DEAR FRIENDS FOR NOT BEING ABLE TO GET INDIVIDUAL REPLIES TO YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS - - THINGS SEEM TO HAVE GONE AWRY FROM THIS END AT THE MOMENT BUT i REALLY APPRECIATE EVERY VISIT AND VIEW MADE ON THIS LITTLE TRIBUTE TO LOVE. - - - HOPING THIS WILL GET POSTED AS MY OTHER ATTEMPTS GOT LOST. -- - from Fay xx
My dear Fay,
I love the Oscar Wilde quote you chose! I wish everyone would tattoo it onto their heart!
An awesome write delivering a beautiful message! Yes, “love’s tune composes much more than music.”
~Laura~
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