Love's Tune.
Love, blind to weakness,
sees only the perfect
but shadows cast images
that sully its song.
Judgement, sans mercy,
creates but disturbance
ends hard-won harmony
which is love's due.
We, what we are receive
notes proving discord
but love's tune composes
much more than music.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A few thoughts on love's depth after reading the above quote.
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Beautiful sentiments Fay
Love's tune composes more than music - just lovely !!
I knows you LOVES my singing really M. lol.
Oh I do - I just switched on the dishwasher and thought of you straight away Orchi.
That dishwasher drown out me singing?!
Glad you found that final line pleasing Michael - - thanks for your encouraging comment too.
Aww, why some say they rather not hear me sing? And why they say they can't tell if it's me singing or two cats fighting? heehee. A fine write Fay. Some people we 'can't stand them'. We may not LIKE them, but can LOVE them hopefully. Same as with my singing!
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ Thanks for sharing ! We are on the same wavelength today ~ Please check LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ~ Thanks BRIAN & ANGELA
Oscar Wilde had a beautiful heart I think. He has more memorable quotes than anyone I can think of.... that song that we hear (if we're lucky) is a lone one in a world of shrieks....
Thanks, Fay. Your words really resonated with me!
No one else sees what the lover sees and, with its own beguiling charm each oddness/strangeness/'dischord' can create within us a unique cherished value which bonds us closer to our special someone.
Binging home the marvel of the oft heard words 'i dont know what you seen in him/her'.
Love's tune indeed. I loved this.
Glad you found that final line pleasing Michael - - thanks for your encouraging comment too.
MY APOLOGIES DEAR FRIENDS FOR NOT BEING ABLE TO GET INDIVIDUAL REPLIES TO YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS - - THINGS SEEM TO HAVE GONE AWRY FROM THIS END AT THE MOMENT BUT i REALLY APPRECIATE EVERY VISIT AND VIEW MADE ON THIS LITTLE TRIBUTE TO LOVE. - - - HOPING THIS WILL GET POSTED AS MY OTHER ATTEMPTS GOT LOST. -- - from Fay xx
My dear Fay,
I love the Oscar Wilde quote you chose! I wish everyone would tattoo it onto their heart!
An awesome write delivering a beautiful message! Yes, “love’s tune composes much more than music.”
~Laura~
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