never misjudge a
Lady ~ Adam did and on
Earth ~ all Hell broke loose !
ANGELA & RUTH
now in New Zealand ~ Ladies
always successful !
SHE was everyone's
favourite ~ cos she always smiled
from her head to toe !
when GOD made ADAM
He thought ~ I could do better
He smiled ~ and made EVE !
every aspect of
MY LADY is perfection
and I love her so !
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love BRIAN XOX
The song SHE by Charles Aznavour is one of my favourites
I have included it as a TRIBUTE to ANGELA for all the LOVE
She gives from the Other Side of the World ~ LOVE ALWAYS XOX
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A fine write Brian. Adam blamed Eve; Eve blamed the serpent/devil. We're not told if it was an apple, or what it was.
Thanks STEVE ~ Apples are not the only Fruit ! Pleased you liked it ! I was still editing ~ There are now FIVE SENRYU and did you get the lovely song SHE sung with feeling by its composer Charles Aznavour ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN !
Super work Brian.
THANKS MIKE ~ pleased you liked it ~ I do my best to present Classical Forms ~ correctly and in context ~ BRIAN
I laughed at the first Senryu--great one! They are all good. The last one is so romantic for Angela. Hope she is doing well. Hugs to you both!
Thanks CHRIS ~ Pleased you liked them ~ the first one was to go with the Picture ! Angela and Ruth have arrived in Auckland and love the CITY and the FLAT ! They are near enough to the hospital to walk or cycle ! There are bikes at the Flat and a car at their disposal when they sort the Insurance out ! They don't start work 'til Monday but will visit the Hospital on Thursday & Friday ~ Saturday shopping ~ Sunday Church ! They were shock to find they'd missed Summer ~ it is already Autumn (Fall) in NZ. She is going to send me some emails for a Poem in JUNE ~ OK ~ Wish i was with them ! the flat looks nice on SKYPE ! Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@@@@@
Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Scritture meravigliose!
The legendary Charles Aznavour!
Great song! I enjoyed it!
Abbracci e Baci per te ed Angela...
~Laura~
CIAO LAURA ~ LA MIA CARA AMICA ~ Pleased you liked the SENRYU and the SONG ~ SHE by CA is one of my all time favourites ! He sings with such pathos in his voice ! Abbracci e Baci di nos BRIAN ed ANGELA (now in NEW ZEALAND and loving it !)
I knew she would! It’s a fabulous place!
This year is the centenary of women being given the vote in the UK.
Thank you for your lovely tribute for women!
Keep writing
FineB
Thanks FB ~ YES Ladies are wonderful ! Pleased you liked my tribute. Yours BRIAN. Please add a Poem to my FUSION on ARTISTS ~ press developing to see it and add ~ OK
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