never misjudge a

Lady ~ Adam did and on

Earth ~ all Hell broke loose !



now in New Zealand ~ Ladies

always successful !


SHE was everyone's

favourite ~ cos she always smiled

from her head to toe !


when GOD made ADAM

He thought ~ I could do better

He smiled ~ and made EVE !


every aspect of 

MY LADY is perfection

and I love her so ! 


Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love BRIAN XOX


The song SHE by Charles Aznavour is one of my favourites

I have included it as a TRIBUTE to ANGELA for all the LOVE

She gives from the Other Side of the World ~ LOVE ALWAYS XOX  


  • orchidee

    A fine write Brian. Adam blamed Eve; Eve blamed the serpent/devil. We're not told if it was an apple, or what it was.


      Thanks STEVE ~ Apples are not the only Fruit ! Pleased you liked it ! I was still editing ~ There are now FIVE SENRYU and did you get the lovely song SHE sung with feeling by its composer Charles Aznavour ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN !

    • Michael Edwards

      Super work Brian.

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        THANKS MIKE ~ pleased you liked it ~ I do my best to present Classical Forms ~ correctly and in context ~ BRIAN

      • Christina8

        I laughed at the first Senryu--great one! They are all good. The last one is so romantic for Angela. Hope she is doing well. Hugs to you both!

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          Thanks CHRIS ~ Pleased you liked them ~ the first one was to go with the Picture ! Angela and Ruth have arrived in Auckland and love the CITY and the FLAT ! They are near enough to the hospital to walk or cycle ! There are bikes at the Flat and a car at their disposal when they sort the Insurance out ! They don't start work 'til Monday but will visit the Hospital on Thursday & Friday ~ Saturday shopping ~ Sunday Church ! They were shock to find they'd missed Summer ~ it is already Autumn (Fall) in NZ. She is going to send me some emails for a Poem in JUNE ~ OK ~ Wish i was with them ! the flat looks nice on SKYPE ! Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@@@@@

        • Laura🌻

          Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
          Scritture meravigliose!
          The legendary Charles Aznavour!
          Great song! I enjoyed it!
          Abbracci e Baci per te ed Angela...

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            CIAO LAURA ~ LA MIA CARA AMICA ~ Pleased you liked the SENRYU and the SONG ~ SHE by CA is one of my all time favourites ! He sings with such pathos in his voice ! Abbracci e Baci di nos BRIAN ed ANGELA (now in NEW ZEALAND and loving it !)

            • Laura🌻

              I knew she would! It’s a fabulous place!

            • FineB

              This year is the centenary of women being given the vote in the UK.

              Thank you for your lovely tribute for women!

              Keep writing

              • BRIAN & ANGELA

                Thanks FB ~ YES Ladies are wonderful ! Pleased you liked my tribute. Yours BRIAN. Please add a Poem to my FUSION on ARTISTS ~ press developing to see it and add ~ OK

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