Down the Rabbit Hole

MrNobody40

"I wanna get out of here"
She screamed in silence
Down the rabbit hole
Was the essence of life
Bleeding from the inside out
And outside in
"Don’t look back" she said
As she jumped through
I wanna get out of here
And find myself forgotten

 

  • Author: MrNobody40 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 19th, 2018 08:12
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 25
Get a free collection of Classic Poetry ↓

✔ Receive the ebook in seconds ✔ 50 poems from 50 different authors


Comments +

Comments4

  • willyweed

    interesting read, left me wanting more? ww

    • MrNobody40

      Thank you. It's supposed to leave one hanging.

    • Michael Edwards

      Well I'm hanging - please keep writing.

    • Goldfinch60

      in any rabbit hole there is an entrance, that entrance is also the exit that will take you towards the light.

    • SLR

      They're right. You left us hanging there. When is part two when she exits? Who did she become? What does she meet on the other side? I'll be looking for her continuing story. (Hint, hint) 🙂 🙂

      • MrNobody40

        Currently I have no plans on writing a continuance to this poem, however if I do you shall be the first to know



      To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.