nicolibellamont

From a Daydream

I watch the world from a daydream
As it passes by
A looking glass mirrored in my mind
I watch and I dream
Too many faces with eyes averted
Wandering as if by no offense
Or without purpose
I watch as the sea of time patiently dies
And yet I am merely a reflection of life
The unseen.

 

Comments5

  • Teyonce

    So powerful. Wonderful poem

    • nicolibellamont

      Thank you very much. I often feel invisible.

    • Michael Edwards

      This flows perfectly - super read N

    • drabbler

      This is beautiful, powerful, and moving. Wonderful read.

    • Goldfinch60

      Very good write but that reflection you see in the mirror is just that a reflection, you cannot see yourself as others see you so you are not unseen.

    • SLR

      I agree with Gold finch. You are seen. The people around you see you, but when you share with us on mps you gift us with glimpses of your soul. I think many writers are a bit introverted at times and feel invisible to others but this is how we are REALLY able to be seen. For WHO we are inside. From what I've 'seen' you have a beautiful soul. We SEE you. Thank you for a wonderful post.

      • nicolibellamont

        That was very beautiful. Thank you. Sometime one needs to be reminded



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