I'm not too much of a love poet, but if i was
I'd write about
how your eyes pull me in like the moon does the ocean
I'd write about
how your hands dance on my skin like a ballerina
or how your lips move into sweet poetry
I'd write about
how i melt in front of you like a ice sculpture
or how your body is so beautiful it sings words your mouth don't even know the words to
if i were a love poet, i would write about you.
- Author: skyler.miles19 ( Offline)
- Published: May 22nd, 2018 08:29
- Category: Love
- Views: 16
Comments4
WELCOME SKYLER ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ BEAUTIFUL ~ You really are a LOVE POET ! Your Poem has a lovely structure and the repetition of "I'd write about" gives it connection and flow. The contents makes it proper LOVE POEM ! It speaks of:
The Moon-like lure of the EYES
The Poetry of the the LIPS
The Dancing touch of the hands
The melting ~ like ice ~ of LOVE
The exquisite beauty of the BODY
The Song of LOVE
This is the LANGUAGE of LOVE
This is a lovely LOVE POEM
Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B !
Wow Skyler, you most definately are the poet any of us would wish to be.
Thank you guys so much
Very good love poem. Welcome to MPS.
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