LiterateLesbian

high

Our

                       young

     love

                     is

 like           a

           curse

like

             taking

a                     pill

          and

chasing             

                     the

same

               highs

 

Comments3

  • Goldfinch60

    May your highs be joyous.

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    HI FRIEND ~ Love the disjointedness of your Poem ! I my experience (17 years) is just like that ! I'm in LOVE again but ANGELA is in NEW ZEALAND FOR A YEAR so it's CYBER LOVE ~ which is bearable ~ but even more discontinuous ! Pleased check my Poems ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) PS ~ I shop in ALDI ~ great Staff ~ great Choice ~ great VALUE !

    • LiterateLesbian

      Hey Brian, thanks for taking the time to reply to my poem 😀 Ah, i tried to do the layout differently so it's not as straightforward. Sometimes it takes a while to put things in order so i thought it would suit the poem well due to it being short. Aw, i hope you two are happy together and get to personally have love too haha! And thankyou, just recently started there, i think i will enjoy the new role 🙂

    • HangingbyaHalo

      its crazy how in many aspects of life you chase the high. I love this.



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