Ten thousand angels singing
Ten thousand demons cry
They have all the answers
They know the reason why
Is anybody out there?
Can you hear my call?
Please send me an answer
I need to know it all
Somewhere in the distance
Beyond the setting sun
Ten thousand angels singing
Ten thousand demons run
I stand before the altar
In the temple of the King
He has all the answers
He tells me everything
- Author: willyweed ( Offline)
- Published: May 29th, 2018 10:01
- Category: Fantasy
- Views: 50
- Users favorite of this poem: Broken_kingdom, Laura🌻, Dust, Syd
Comments10
Why do the demons cry? In reality they're the ones that are free
Thank you for the save I disagree demons are slaves to their master peace we
The angels are the ones that have to watch have something they might never have. The demons may be slaves but they are more free in some sense. After all they can do what they want and angels are bound by rules.
willyweed
Beautiful poem!
My favorite...
“Ten thousand angels singing
Ten thousand demons run”
~Laura~
Thank you ww
Just flows - such great meter - another winner Willy.
Thanks so much Michael ww
Ccooeeee, I'm here! lol. A fine write ww.
Thank you Ww
Super write and yes there is somebody out there and always will be.
Thank you ww
Really good poem Willyweed, reminds me of Pink Floyd - The Wall.
- Syd
Thank you Syd I have poems aplenty....enjoy also thanks for the save as a fav. peace ww
Very good. Thanks for sharing it.
your welcome I appreciate the read. ww
I enjoy this poem or maybe it's more of a prayer. It's encouraging. By the way, who are they in the second stanza? The angels? And do they know all because of God? Just wondering.
Thanks!
Thanks for the read Charlotte I do appreciate it ( they are both the angels and demons for seeing more than we can. I say more then we can but I mean more the we do because we use only a small percent of our true brain power. And yes everything is because of GOD. it's a slice of heaven to meet you and sweet dreams 4 u...peace ww
Is there anybody in there?
what does that suppose to mean?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fNLhxKpfCnA
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VHk6clzLeMM
I don't watch youtube and never have.
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