Indecisive House Wrens

Lorna



Your little feathers all aflutter

You bring your wife you chirp and mutter

You love the wreath that’s on my door

To set up house there you’d adore

 

While that won’t do as clearly seen

By the mess you make with mossy greens

I’ve hung a house for you nearby

A red one just for you to try

 

I’m waiting now to see if you

Are smart enough to move into

Through curtained windows watch you both

Contemplating this new birdy house

 

But so far you are nowhere near

To setting up a family where

We’ll both be happy with the spot

Where you will raise your little tots

 

  • Author: Lorna (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 4th, 2018 07:21
  • Comment from author about the poem: Well, wrens aren't white....... but I liked the song................ couldn't find one for "little brown wrens".......... can someone please write one?
  • Category: Nature
  • Views: 58
  • Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻
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  • Fay Slimm.

    The scene and the wrens looking for house-room is outlined delightfully in this charming rhyme - - birds as I know can be oh so fussy when choosing right spots for nest my friend - a lovely read Lorna.

  • Lorna

    Hi Fay! I let them set up house in the wreath one year and it was adorable to see their little heads peeking out - UNTIL - they got very big for the nest and Momma bird cleaned the nest out each day all over the front door..... it was a difficult decision to miss out on the little faces

  • orchidee

    A fine write Lorna.

    • Lorna

      Ta Orchi.........

    • Poetic Dan

      A beautiful picture painted with wonderful flow. Thank you

      • Lorna

        Thank you!

      • Michael Edwards

        One of the most delightful birds - let's hope the sort out the removals soon.

        • Lorna

          Feisty little devils!

        • willyweed

          I like your poem lorna it made me smile ww

          • Lorna

            You make me smile - thanks ww!

          • Laura🌻

            Lorna,
            If I were a musician, I would write a “litttle brown wrens” song just for you!😉

            I enjoyed the read! A delightful poem and pic! It must be amazing watching them!

            ~Laura~

            • Lorna

              Actually L - they are watching me!

              • Laura🌻

                😄

              • Goldfinch60

                Glorious write, we have the occasional wren in our garden but no nests. We do have a blackbirds nest in our laurel bush though and it is stopping me cutting it.

                • Lorna

                  I love that you're not a home wrecker!



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