Who am I now you're disappearing
Who will I be when you are gone
Will I be a lone survivor
Or a song that has been sung
Searching for the far off portal
You'll hold open once you're gone
Will you call me from the ethers
Will your new voice drift to me
Will I have to spend long years while
Searching for you in my dreams
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A fine write Lorna - all about me?! lol.
Always you Orchi........ you old devil.............
Lorna,
A lot of questions you will continue to ask. He will always be with you and he will hold that portal open for as long as he has to! True Love Never Dies!
Great pic and song for your loving write!
~Laura~
What I can't figure out is........ why aren't very religious people who believe in the glory of the afterlife in more of a hurry to get there? I personally love the idea but I'm not religious at all (spiritual yes - religious no)....... ha ha....
I think we just want to continue the living experience that we understand as long as possible...especially if we’re living a healthy life!
As my mom says, “I’ve lived a good, long life. Whenever HE wants to take me, I’m ready!”
Good write, that live will never die.
Love the write Lorna and dear old Joe to go with it. A friends son was married to his daughter - he's just the same in real life.
Love cannot die yet this set of poignant questions has to be asked when a loved one has to say a goodbye - - a heart-tug of a read dear Lorna.
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