Now I'm sitting here left with nothing but memories,
and these great stories.
I'm left here hurting,
wondering.
Where did things go so wrong?
It feels like we didn't have very long.
I'm left here missing someone who doesn't care,
who would instead of being here, would rather be there.
-csm
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Author:
cmize (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This is something I wrote after losing someone special to me....
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Life goes on. Be happy for the loss because it makes you stronger and more prepared for the future. Don't give in to sadness.
Thank you!
WELCOME CMIZE ~ Tanks for you first poem ~ Well penned but with a sad content ! In my experience Life is always a mixture of UPS and DOWNS ~ I have lost Friends and at least one Special Girl Friend who said she loved me but in the end not enough ~ so she moved on ~ and it HURT and the memory still does. However I am now Engaged (for the first time !) to ANGELA and we are still very much in LOVE and expect to get married. So the is Ecstasy after Agony ~ thanks for sharing ~ every blessing for the Future ! YOURS BRIAN (UK) The way MPS works is we comment mutually on each others poems ! It is a very supportive site ! You can also build up a cohort of MPS Friends. Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B !
Well, first congratulations on the engagement. So refreshing to hear you found someone so special to you, after losing someone special. Thank you for commenting, I appreciate it. And I will happily check out some of your poems. Have a blessed day!
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