ForeverJesus6

If Only I Had Just One

If only I had,

just one friend,

one who I could trust,

rather than being,

alone in the end.

It would be just,

the two of us.

Still, for now I have,

no one to trust,

or no one to claim as mine.

Not even 'man's best friend' decided,

to stay by my side.

So who am I to turn to,

when I am feeling down?

If you know me,

then I'm sure,

you know by now.

Still, it would be nice,

to have a friend anyhow.

If only I had,

just one friend.

Comments5

  • Goldfinch60

    Friends can be so important in our lives, there will be one there for you.

  • orchidee

    A fine write Forever. You could have a little dog (or large one) as 'man's best friend' - or a cat, or some pet!

  • Snowflake Incorrigable



    If God is for us, who can be against us! ... but God is far more powerful than him. If God is on our side, standing up for us, we can be sure that we will win at life.

    You call yourself ForeverJesus6 and you write this? I am laughing my ass off!!

    • ForeverJesus6

      You quote the Bible to me. You talk to me as if you know God. Maybe you do, and maybe you don't. Still, you can't expect your knowledge of him to be taken seriously when you swear in the same sentence. I thought poetry is meant to let you express how you feel. Persistence is key.

      • Snowflake Incorrigable

        Oh God, its him again, Sorry I can see how strong your faith is, when you have God and call yourself ForeverJesus and yet still feel like that. It clearly shows you have real belief note like those fake, deceitful people who are wolves in sheep clothing, calling God's name in vain and advocating do as I so not as I do, You really are a shinning example of a good Christian, please apologise to your God for your crisis of faith.
        To my understanding 'ass' is not a swear word and if it is MY GOD, would not hold that against me. Now if you excuse me I have better things to do.,

      • Frogspoetry

        THAT WAS A RUDE THING TO SAY SNOWFLAKE,WE NEED TO STICK TOGETHER AND UNDERSTAND THAT WE ALL HAVE HARD DAYS AND STRUGGLE TO BE AS GOOD AS WE CAN,YOU WILL HAVE TO ANSWER TO GOD ONE DAY AND BE JUDGED FOR EVERY WORD THAT YOU HAVE SAID ND FOR THINGS THAT YOU HAVE DONE,BUT GODS SALVATION CAN SAVE YOU FROM YOUR SINS,FOR WE ALL HAVE SINNED,WE WERE BORN IN SIN.BE CAREFUL OF EVERY IDLE WORD YOU SAY.

      • Frogspoetry

        THAT WAS A GREAT POEM DION,SNOWFLAKES COMMENT JUST MADE ME ANGRY.
        I KNOW THAT YOU REALIZE THAT JESUS WILL AND ALWAYS BE YOUR FRIEND AND FATHER,
        AS FOR FRIENDS IN THIS WORLD,I AM YOUR FRIEND,I WILL BE WAITING FOR YOU AT THE GATES.I FEEL THAT YOU HAVE ALOT OF FRIENDS ON MPS WHO WILL BE WAITING FOR YOU.DON'T WORRY BUDDY,YOU ARE NOT ALONE.



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