A LITTER OF LANTURNES
Words
unsaid
by loved ones
often cause most
pain.
Thoughts
expressed
in great haste
may not reflect
truth.
The
cherished
memories
are the ones that
last.
- Author: Michael Edwards ( Offline)
- Published: June 21st, 2018 00:16
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 58
Comments9
You writing a load of rubbish there - litter?! heehee. But no, fine writes again M, with enough syllables!
Might write a herd or haikus, or a swarm of senryus, or a(beat this) murmeration of monostichs π
*Gets out dictionary for these words, and staggers back in amazement*. I can't see any lanterns in this - I need some light! Ohh, I'm too un-cultured with poetic forms.
And I'm a spoilsport - the nights are drawing in again after today! doh!
Gor blimey O - I 'ad to look 'em up too I don't know nuffinck.
Three meaningful Lanturnes Michael.
A litter of truth adorns these lanturnes - - great read Michael.
Thanks Fay
Truer light never shined.
3 pretty little lanturnes as well
I like the 3rd the best like a christmas tree
Bravo again Michael
Andrew
Cheers Andrew
Michael,
Three written beauties and a beautiful flower garden pic!
The lanturnes are all relatable! The one that stings for me is the first one!
~Laura~
A white thrift - lovely flower. thanks Laura
Thought-provoking as always Michael. Like the first one best. So true. Although I'm not sure I agree with the second, I've always felt the opposite was true. Don't feel bad orchidee, I also had to get out the dictionary on that one! π π .
Thanks SLR - yes the opposite is sometimes true.
Cooeee - how did the evening go? Did Russia win again? Or they not played any more games yet?!
I suppose with the second one, we might blurt out: 'You always...' or 'You never...' etc. Sometimes may be true, sometimes not.
It could almost be that it didn't if it did but I won't just in case it does - if you see what I mean.
Thank you Michael.
A beautiful poem, poignant, powerful and ever so true.
Keep writing
FineB
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