There is a pain in my heart
This hole that lies inside there
Unfree and carefree
Sad and hurt
The day gets lonelier
My emotions are deadlier
Emotionless or numb
Can’t decide if its cos I am dumb
Or because I am in love
But the pain caused inside its hard to heal
What feels do I preach
The one I had died the day I saw you and her
It’s like a depression and addiction mixed
Don’t know which one killed me first
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Author:
Red (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This poem means so much to me, hope you guys love it as much as I do.
- Category: Love
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Comments3
HI RED ~ Thanks for your first POEM ~ Well written but with a SAD content ! It is something we can all empathise with because "along the way" we have all "Loved & Lost" but for me there have been some positives (and lots of negatives) in each experience ! I am now engaged for the FIRST (and I hope the last !) TIME to Angela who is a PHYSIOTHERAPIST ~ I teach Science in a College. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ thinking of you and trusting you will find the right Partner soon ~ OK ~ Please check my Poems ~ Yours BRIAN The way MPS works is that we read & comment on each others poems ~ it is an interactive site ~ Yours B !
Thank you for your feedback❤️ Thank you also for the hope, hopefully I can move on it was a painful love❤️
Beautiful
Thank you ❤️
I thought I would read backwards for a change.. You have left a fine poem here, filled to overflowing with both sadness and regret.. if autobiographical, I hope things have since improved .. Neville
Thank you!
my pleasure....
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