IM IN NEW ZEALAND
Three weeks and Im exploring
Countryside and Town
Strange that Ive never had a
FEELING that Im UPSIDE DOWN!
(My MUM said don't cough
You might just drop off!)
I went to see a
KIWI: NZ Flightless BIRD
So it is absurd
That in NZ theres a fine
Airline: The KIWI AIRLINE!
TENA KOE says
Hello : HAERE MAI says
Welcome : MARENA
Says Good Morning : KA PAI
Says Thank You - Im so fluent!
I love to sail in
AUCKLAND BAY : Ive been SAILING
All Day today
Dont have to work SATURDAY
Ive been sailing : AUCKLAND BAY
(I remind you its 7pm Saturday here!)
So if you want to
Have no stress : Each day be Blessed
Forget your PAIN : Get
On a PLANE high int sky : YOULL
Reach NEW ZEALAND : Bye & Bye!
KA PAI : Just a glimpse please comment ~ ANGELA XXXX
NEW ZEALAND is MAGIC! Dont tell BRIAN
but I never want to go back to BREXIT
BRIAN will have to emigrate here to ME!
All these POEMS are in "Tanka Mode" 31 Syllables
in a 5 7 5 7 7 pattern : BRIAN calls them HAIKU &
SENRYU with Attitude! Please enjoy : ANGELA
- Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: June 30th, 2018 02:01
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 37
Comments6
great one Angela. I don't think that Brian would care that he was tied to a mast,as long as he was with you.New Zealand sounds beautiful.
Greetings fro NZ Sister : Its 7:30am Sunday Morning (1.6.18) so Im awake and just checking replies to my TANKAS : MPS is such a fun site and so many poeple from round the Globe. Pleased you liked my Poems & Picture & Sailing Song. Yes BRIAN & I do miss each other but its only a Year and BRIAN (and DAVID) do appreciate what a an opportunity it is for RUTH & I to experience all the Blessings of NZ : Love always demands a Sacrifice ~ AMEN I am sure when Brian & David come to visit in August they will be good Boys and fly home again after their visit. They both have responsible jobs in the UK which is why they couldnt exchange as well c\'est la vie! Thanks for your comment : Love SISTER ANGELA XXXX Its only 50F here rising to 58F later but it is the middle of Winter!
Here in Oregon it is 85 F,and summer just started.I think that Brian and David will have a blast with you ladies.I know that Brian is counting down the days until he gets to have you by his side again.
All my love I am sending to you and Ruth. Many blessings. Your sister in Christ melissa
Nice One Angela ! Love your TANKAS they give extra scope for amplification & explanation ! You make me jealous I might come out earlier. As you have discovered they sail all year round in Auckland the Winters are so mild ~ love the video you posted and the picture of the NZ National Bird ~ the KIWI. Missing you lots ~ All My Love BRIAN XOX
GOOD MORNING SWEETHEART ~ Its gone 7am SUNDAY MORNING (1st JULY) and I just checked my computer to see if the were any comments on my TANKAS! Love this form it gives me a chance to comment on my experiences \"Down Under\" Its a pity there isnt a tube through the Centre of the Earth and a two hour trip London to Auckland by capsule : I guess the core is too hot ? Pleased you liked my Tankas & Sailing Video & Kiwi : Enjoying the Sailing. Pleased you had great weather for your Church Fete (Saturday) Its 9C (48F) here and will rise to 13C (55F) later : Not bad for the middle of Winter. Missing You too : All my Love from NZ ANGELA XXXX
Nice one Angela--Thanks for sharing your experiences with us. Sounds so much fun sailing! Sister Christina
Good Morning CHRISTINA : Thanks for your response, pleased you liked my Poem & Picture & sailing Song. I love NZ and being able to sail in the middles of Winter it was nearly 60F yesterday. Its now 8am Sunday Morning and its already 50F and rising ! It never snows in Auckland and the Sea never freezes so we can sail all year round! Brian & I do miss each other but all four of us (including Ruth & David) thought the Experience was worth the Sacrifice ! Its JULY now and we will all meet up in August : Absence does make the heart grow fonder. Trust You and Yours are all OK : Praying for y'all Lots of Love ANGELA XXXX
Thank you Angela for such a wonderful response. Praying for you too! Love Christina
Cooeee (hello!) - fine write Angela.
GOOD MORNING STEPHEN Its 8am Sunday Morning here and 50F in the middle of Winter (1st of July) I find the topsy turvey Seasons difficult tocope with (UK is 75F plus!) also that timewise I am 11 hours (and several Centuries !) ahead of you already. Thanks for posting your HYMN & SPIRITUAL POEM every day : very uplifting and (by His comments) I know that Brian Really appreciates them too. New Zealand is an awesome 24/7 experience and worth the sacrifice of the separation ~ AMEN Pleased you enjoyed my Poem Picture & Sailing Song. As you know BRIAN & I are sharing a SITE : Hope its not too confusing! Love to You & Yours : ANGELA XXXX
Hi, Angela!
Loved your TANKAS, pic and video! I’m glad you’re having a great time in a beautiful Place! I’ve been there on my way to Australia! I have relatives in Melbourne!
Awesome! Soon you’ll see your darling! Enjoy!
Abbracci e Baci...
~Laura~
Good tankas Angela, you obviously love it out there, I am sure Brian will be with you out there before long.
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