Girl fled the river
Tired of endlessness
She tossed her stones to the wildest sea
It rose up and told her, you can just be!
She watched in awe at the mighty strength
Powered not by mankind, but ancient moon
She let the waves rise and fall
Patient as she heard it call.
She soaked up the mighty beauty
Overwhelmed by her own absence of beautiful mightyness
Why would the ocean greet her so
Allow her to exist within its ebb and flow?
She pondered the path which led her here
Granted gift of friend to kindred soul
How the mild and meak
Such a strength in wild woman could seek.
Girl fled the river
Tired of endlessness
She tossed her masks into the wildest sea
They laughed and danced and sang just be!
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Wow sylviasearcher!
A powerful, vivid poem!
Wonderful!
Keep writing
FineB
Thanks fine b.
I think I need to add some cake but then it would be like that annoying pop song which my son tells me does not mean eating cake by the ocean? 🤔
Super work - it goes well with Fay's posting today. Enjoyed.
Thank you michael
Perhaos some penguins, cake and sea. Sounds like perfect nonsense to me!
Love the musical ending. Brilliantly done
Thank you poetic Dan 😎
I have not tested this but based on my vast experience of cake... I think most would float!
What are you doing at the alpha hotel in Sorrento?
Beautiful . “She watched in awe at the mighty strength
Powered not by mankind, but ancient moon”
Love how this simplifies life that we all forget to much these days.
that's one of the beauties of the ocean.. it can be whatever you want it to be.. I am so glad I live near it...
She tossed her masks into the wildest sea
They laughed and danced and sang just be.... let it be.. I say.. Neville
But what do we let be and what do we let the ocean wash away?
Thanks for reading...
Not one of my best...
subjectivity is not an objective in my book... maybe not, but I have a long way to go yet and I liked it.. N
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