OldPine

Desire in the shadows

There’s Desire in the shadows,

Something we cannot hide,

When we’re alone and smiling,

Free like the evening tide,

 

A robin in the summer,

The beauty of a rose,

A view to make us tranquil

Enough to bring us close.

 

There’s Desire in the shadows,

Something we cannot hide,

A whisper of I love you

Away from busy lives

 

The artist telling stories

And tales of friends he meets

There’s anger in the streetlights

We move back into peace,

 

There’s Desire in the shadows,

Something we cannot hide,

A whisper of I love you.

Let’s come back some time.

Comments4

  • sylviasearcher

    What a beautiful poem

    • OldPine

      Thank you.

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      WELCOME "OP" thanks for your first Poem ! It is very elegant in its STRUCTURE ~ 5 balanced Quatrains with a consistent Rhyme Pattern {xaxa xbxb etc) and the use of Repetition in verses 1 3 5 ~ Excellent to read & recite ! Love the Subject ~ the symbiosis of LOVE & LIFE. MPS works by reading & commenting each others Poems ~ Poems are only posted for ONE DAY. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my site ~ Thanks B !

      • OldPine

        Thank you . Its good To be part of the site.

      • Goldfinch60

        Beautiful loving write. Welcome to MPS.

      • little dove

        beautiful



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