- It’s a onetime visit so you better get it right
- No room for mistakes or time to be polite
- So wear your best tuxedo or that shiny party frock
- One twirl around the dance floor on this wet and mossy rock
- So find the ones who love you, keep them close and treat them well
- Learn all you can about them, when they’re gone they cannot tell
- It’s a onetime visit so you better be polite
- and it doesn’t really matter, if you don’t always get it right.
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Author:
Andrew Charles Forrest (
Offline) - Published: July 5th, 2018 09:34
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- User favorite of this poem: Poetic Dan.
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Awesome read and write. Loved the message. First options of one means a lot. If your misread it's almost impossible to get another shot!
Sorry to butt in 😉 I like that one too
Thanks H you're right sometimes just one shot
Andrew
Eight made it great enough for a plate
Making me feel its never to late
Definitely a favourite and well needed too
Thank for being exactly the who that's you
Thanks for the Fav Dan
Glad you enjoyed
Andrew
Super work Andrew
Thanks Michael
Andrew
Love this write! Great inspiration.
Very well written.
Where others would drone on and on with the message you convey you have managed to pack so much into this piece in a succinct compact way.
It's punchy and truly meaningful.
I like it.
Good write and message Andrew.
You definitely have something of the sage about ya squire.. message received, over and out..... Neville
Not sure I'm a sage but thanks Neville 😉
pleasure sir and bloomin true....
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