Escape.

Goldfinch60



Each day, as we go through life

We may enter a room,

A room where there is no escape.

No matter how we search

We appear to be trapped in a box,

But that box which we are in

Can always be surmounted.

As all we need to do

Is think outside the box,

And an escape from reality awaits us.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 16th, 2018 01:40
  • Comment from author about the poem: Go forward in life, it is there to be lived.
  • Category: Forgiveness
  • Views: 36
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  • orchidee

    A fine write Gold. Doh, I saw some items, the reverse of 'keep calm and carry on'. They said 'Panic and give up!'
    Any escape from my singing room/box, if one enters it? I will lock the door and keep the key if anyone enters. It's a torture room! heehee.

  • dusk arising

    I love it! Lateral thinking.
    Actually, when you read some of the wonderful pieces presented here on MPS clearly there are t hose among us who do think outside the box evident by the 'angle' from which they approach their subject. I like to be surprised by such indirect routes which inspire me to think again.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you da, lateral thinking is good, as you know all you need to do listen to some of the Jazzers, Mike’s Davis for instance.

    • Poetic Dan

      Love it, nothing left in my mind but blissfulness of a little rhyme.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank yo PD most kind.

      • Michael Edwards

        A good piece - and good advice too.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Michael, artists think outside the box on many occasions.

        • E-Poems

          Awesome, really enjoyed this write. ~E

          • Goldfinch60

            Most kind EP, thank you.

          • onepauly

            im always outside the box.
            but every once in a while I take a peek in.

            • Goldfinch60

              That’s the way to do it.



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