Each day, as we go through life
We may enter a room,
A room where there is no escape.
No matter how we search
We appear to be trapped in a box,
But that box which we are in
Can always be surmounted.
As all we need to do
Is think outside the box,
And an escape from reality awaits us.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Go forward in life, it is there to be lived.
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Comments6
A fine write Gold. Doh, I saw some items, the reverse of 'keep calm and carry on'. They said 'Panic and give up!'
Any escape from my singing room/box, if one enters it? I will lock the door and keep the key if anyone enters. It's a torture room! heehee.
Thank you Orchi.
I love it! Lateral thinking.
Actually, when you read some of the wonderful pieces presented here on MPS clearly there are t hose among us who do think outside the box evident by the 'angle' from which they approach their subject. I like to be surprised by such indirect routes which inspire me to think again.
Thank you da, lateral thinking is good, as you know all you need to do listen to some of the Jazzers, Mike’s Davis for instance.
Love it, nothing left in my mind but blissfulness of a little rhyme.
Thank yo PD most kind.
A good piece - and good advice too.
Thank you Michael, artists think outside the box on many occasions.
Awesome, really enjoyed this write. ~E
Most kind EP, thank you.
im always outside the box.
but every once in a while I take a peek in.
That’s the way to do it.
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