There is something I absorb from your words
I like to transport into your world in reverse
Am I a reflection of what you all write
Have I brought love, compassion or anything light
If so i get a build up of energy satisfyingly quite unique
Nothing else can come close I'd be forever expanding on it
Yet on the other side if I see myself from the thoughts you express
Have I brought on any sorrow, pain or helpless
Then my soul grips my chest and I sit with it
Apologising for the moments and a new cause is set
For Bruce Lee told me:
Absorb what is use full
Disregard what is not
But add essentially
What is your own
Don't think feel
Do not concentrate on the finger
Or you'll miss all the Heavenly Glory
Then Tupac (Amaru Shakur) sang to me
Money for war
But not the poor
We all have an inner battle that you can't ignore
Ladys keep you head up we want to do more
I can't change the past but I can make my voice pure
I'm now finishing here as I could go on but I guess that's my point, I don't know how I would with out everyone else's words.
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Poetic Dan (
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You are always noticed as a great guy and a wonderful mind.
Are my eyes playing tricks as you look like the lady in the house of sticks? That in printed the most wonderful writings, one of which still lives on in my mind, of a little village where all poet's go from time to time?
I LOVE that picture and quote so much! You my friend have a special talent. a brilliant mind and insanely good thought process. I admire you daily. ~ E
I know right! I'm so greatful to the one that made it up and shared so I could download.
I'm glad this writing shows the admiration is returned.
So am I, I'm going to steal it! š
Good artists borrow, great artists steal š
Not sure where that's from but I'd say nothing can be stolen if no one lays claim.
everyone has a tale to tell.
great write.
And if we all let it out maybe it would break this spell.
Much appreciated my friend
I think you spell fine.
ha! ha!
Thanks DAN you have touched on an important aspect of what MPS is all about ~ We are Family ! If NOBODY reads or comments on one of our Poems ~ THE POEM DOES NOT EXIST ~ OK. I try to encourage NEW POETS and explain to them that MPS is all about READING & COMMENTING ! Thanks for reading & commenting on mine. We have a heritage of 10,000 Years of ORAL & WRITTEN POETRY ~ Man is a poetic Animal ! I love FUSIONS because you can add an actual ODE instead of just commenting ~ awesome ! Please check my latest FUSION on PRAYER ~ Thanks ~ Yours BRIAN.
Always love what you have to say my friend ill also check out what else you said
Very good write PD we write hoping that others will read our work.
That we do and I truly thank you my friend.
Dan,
If I hadnāt read Spinnerās MURMURATION, I would have totally missed this awesome poem of yours! How the h*** did I miss this one!
āI canāt change the past but I can make my voice pureā...
Great words to adhere to ... by all of us!
~Laura~
Hahaha, I just read that one 5 minutes ago. Was blown away to see myself mentioned, this life just keeps getting better and better.
Thank you, I hope this roll I'm on doesn't stop but if it does I getting straight back up!
Kudos to you!
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