I found a place I can feel free
Words on paper, no one judges me
It may not make sense, what I say
But at least I can write my troubles away
Thoughts,emotions, and feelings in my mind
My new poetry friends are all so kind
Words of kindness, love and support
Even if my poems seem to fall short
I found a place I can feel free
My imagination often overcomes me
Far off lands with castles and knights
The good guy always wins the fight
I found a place that I feel safe
Writing words brings me to my happy place
A place where no one judges me
Wandering mind, freedom to feel
Nothing to prove, so my pain can heal
I found a place
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Ternic73 (
Offline) - Published: July 20th, 2018 00:08
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What a lovely read. Light hearted, free flowing and joyous.
A wonderful tribute to this great MPS site. I too share your feelings.
THANK YOU SO MUCH
Now how about you reading and commenting on other peoples poems. Thats really how this site works. Your profile page shows not only how many poems you publish but also how many of other people's you read.
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Great write and so true. We are free as the words flow onto the paper, if people enjoy what we write that is a bonus as your words are to me
thank you so much
Lovely poem
thank you
This is awesome TERESA and a perfect tribute to MPS. I have saved it as a FAVOURITE ! EIGHTEEN balanced lines (Rhythm) and rhyming couplets (Rhyme). MPS is a perfect site where we can share & comment. I agree we all feel: Free ~ loved ~ happy ~ safe ~ supported ~ healed ! I FOUND A PLACE ~ AMEN ~ Love BRIAN & ANGELA XOX Angela is my Fiancee and we share a site. She is in New Zealand on a Work Exchange. Please check my FUSION (on Prayer) and today''s Poem ~ MADE IN MICHIGAN ~ Thanks A & B !
Thank you so much Brian missed hearing from you
Wonderful write, a place for all of us to hideaway!
yes it is thank you poetboy 5454
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