Ternic73

I Found A Place

I found a place I can feel free

Words on paper, no one judges me

It may not make sense, what I say

But at least I can write my troubles away

Thoughts,emotions, and feelings in my mind

My new poetry friends are all so kind

Words of kindness, love and support

Even if my poems seem to fall short

I found a place I can feel free

My imagination often overcomes me

Far off lands with castles and knights

The good guy always wins the fight

I found a place that I feel safe

Writing words brings me to my happy place

A place  where no one judges me

Wandering mind, freedom to feel 

Nothing to prove, so my pain can heal

I found a place

Comments5

  • dusk arising

    What a lovely read. Light hearted, free flowing and joyous.
    A wonderful tribute to this great MPS site. I too share your feelings.

    • Ternic73

      THANK YOU SO MUCH

      • dusk arising

        Now how about you reading and commenting on other peoples poems. Thats really how this site works. Your profile page shows not only how many poems you publish but also how many of other people's you read.

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      • Goldfinch60

        Great write and so true. We are free as the words flow onto the paper, if people enjoy what we write that is a bonus as your words are to me

        • Ternic73

          thank you so much

        • little dove

          Lovely poem

          • Ternic73

            thank you

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            This is awesome TERESA and a perfect tribute to MPS. I have saved it as a FAVOURITE ! EIGHTEEN balanced lines (Rhythm) and rhyming couplets (Rhyme). MPS is a perfect site where we can share & comment. I agree we all feel: Free ~ loved ~ happy ~ safe ~ supported ~ healed ! I FOUND A PLACE ~ AMEN ~ Love BRIAN & ANGELA XOX Angela is my Fiancee and we share a site. She is in New Zealand on a Work Exchange. Please check my FUSION (on Prayer) and today''s Poem ~ MADE IN MICHIGAN ~ Thanks A & B !

            • Ternic73

              Thank you so much Brian missed hearing from you

            • poetboy5454

              Wonderful write, a place for all of us to hideaway!

              • Ternic73

                yes it is thank you poetboy 5454



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