HAPPY HARMONIOUS HAIKU ~ BRIAN & ANGELA ~ A COLLABORATION

BRIAN & ANGELA



 

ALL THINGS BRIGHT & BEAUTIFUL

 

THE BIRDS OF THE AIR

Beautiful free and envied

Ooooo for a Dove's Wings !

 

The Apple Blossom 

Is turning to Apples ~ Less

Pretty ~ more tasty !

 

The tadpoles have all

morphed into Frogs ~ most of them

have now hopped away !

 

Butterflies ~ flutter

by ~ Peacocks proud ~ Admirals 

red ~ Cabbages white !

 

Fish are always cool

Live in water ~ waterfalls

are cooling showers

 

Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love B & A XXXX

  • Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 24th, 2018 00:52
  • Category: Nature
  • Views: 83
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  • Goldfinch60

    Good haiku.

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      THANKS ANDY ~ We tend to be purists ~ All about Nature and 5 7 5 or bust ! Yours BRIAN & ANGELA

      • Goldfinch60

        So do I as far as haiku and senryu are concerned.

      • orchidee

        A bright and beautiful poem, clip, and pic B&A.

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          THANKS STEVE ~ We are taking a leaf out of your book and posting Poems & Songs that will lift peoples SPIRITS when they wake up ! Yours BRIAN & ANGELA. However we have to appreciate it's 9:30am (UK) 3:30am (USA) and 8:30pm in New Zealand TEMPUS OSCILLTUM !

        • Heartwriter

          Beautiful together is the write from two hearts! Great job.

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            THANKS ADELE ~ We do it better together ! And even though we are separated by 11,500 miles and 11 hours we collaborate in CYBER SPACE agree and post. Our aim ~ singly or together ~ is always to please and inform ~ pleased you liked it ! BIG HUGS BrIan & Angela @@@@@@@

            • Heartwriter

              Thanks. If you get the time read mine. Happy for you both!

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              THANKS SPINNER ~ I agree HAIKU ~ very short & very sweet & (in Japanese) very visual also. Nature is such a vast subject that there are millions of HAIKU (in hundreds of languages) and on Human Nature & things inanimate SENRYU. Angela & I like HAIKU in other languages ~ She has published in SPANISH and I (in the past) in other languages. Some ignore the 5 7 5 rule for HAIKU in English ~ however following "rules" in all Classical Poetry Forms results in a more elegant ODE ! I run a Poetry Class for Seniors (60+) and once they master HAIKU etc they are unstoppable. Yours BRIAN & ANGELA. Please check my Poem (just publishing) on the PERIODIC TABLE of ELEMENTS !



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