ALL THINGS BRIGHT & BEAUTIFUL
THE BIRDS OF THE AIR
Beautiful free and envied
Ooooo for a Dove's Wings !
The Apple Blossom
Is turning to Apples ~ Less
Pretty ~ more tasty !
The tadpoles have all
morphed into Frogs ~ most of them
have now hopped away !
Butterflies ~ flutter
by ~ Peacocks proud ~ Admirals
red ~ Cabbages white !
Fish are always cool
Live in water ~ waterfalls
are cooling showers
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love B & A XXXX
- Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: July 24th, 2018 00:52
- Category: Nature
- Views: 83
Comments4
Good haiku.
THANKS ANDY ~ We tend to be purists ~ All about Nature and 5 7 5 or bust ! Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
So do I as far as haiku and senryu are concerned.
A bright and beautiful poem, clip, and pic B&A.
THANKS STEVE ~ We are taking a leaf out of your book and posting Poems & Songs that will lift peoples SPIRITS when they wake up ! Yours BRIAN & ANGELA. However we have to appreciate it's 9:30am (UK) 3:30am (USA) and 8:30pm in New Zealand TEMPUS OSCILLTUM !
Beautiful together is the write from two hearts! Great job.
THANKS ADELE ~ We do it better together ! And even though we are separated by 11,500 miles and 11 hours we collaborate in CYBER SPACE agree and post. Our aim ~ singly or together ~ is always to please and inform ~ pleased you liked it ! BIG HUGS BrIan & Angela @@@@@@@
Thanks. If you get the time read mine. Happy for you both!
THANKS SPINNER ~ I agree HAIKU ~ very short & very sweet & (in Japanese) very visual also. Nature is such a vast subject that there are millions of HAIKU (in hundreds of languages) and on Human Nature & things inanimate SENRYU. Angela & I like HAIKU in other languages ~ She has published in SPANISH and I (in the past) in other languages. Some ignore the 5 7 5 rule for HAIKU in English ~ however following "rules" in all Classical Poetry Forms results in a more elegant ODE ! I run a Poetry Class for Seniors (60+) and once they master HAIKU etc they are unstoppable. Yours BRIAN & ANGELA. Please check my Poem (just publishing) on the PERIODIC TABLE of ELEMENTS !
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