when u find
she's not the one
and grow tired
of the things she's done
then the time is here
to make it right
if its gone so wrong
move along tonight
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dusk arising (
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Well. Moving on is sometimes hard to do. Even when there is good cause to do so. I agree it should be done. Great advise. Well said.
A moment ago i was leaving a comment on your piece today and wondering how you would react to mine. A huge grin on my face to find your comment. In years past i have done a 'juliet' phase (similar to your description but without fatality) after a relationships demise but in the end... one has to move along.
Thanks Cat. Yes i know only too well the pain etc but you're so right, one has to ride it out with positivity and move along to 'better times'.
Great shortie dusk.
Thank you kind sir!
Very true but it can be very hard sometimes but it will always be for the better.
Yes, true. I have lived through miserable and torturous endings and failures in my time. The spirit of this piece is to 'know when to fold them' as spinner wrote above.
maybe you are write
maybe she was just wrong for ya...
maybe........ N
There was no particular person in mind here. It was inspired by reading some of the 'poetry' on MPS which were more like a rant about the writers bad partner. Perhaps i could have just written 'Oh shut up and move on if its that bad'.
There was no particular person in mind here. It was inspired by reading some of the 'poetry' on MPS which were more like a rant about the writers bad partner. Perhaps i could have just written 'Oh shut up and move on if its that bad'.
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