Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
Bed of roses or thorns
jarcher54 said:
I don\'t agree with your premise but I understand what you feel... I\'m married 50 years and still love my spouse. But I know nothing is simple and one size does not fit all. Calm deep long love is a blessing, but sometimes passion and arguing in the rain at 2 am is just what the soul needs...
September 16th, 2023 01:16
jarcher54 said:
I don\'t agree with your premise but I understand what you feel... I\'m married 50 years and still love my spouse. But I know nothing is simple and one size does not fit all. Calm deep long love is a blessing, but sometimes passion and arguing in the rain at 2 am is just what the soul needs...
September 16th, 2023 01:16
Bed of roses or thorns
rew4er2nail said:
requited love manifests over time when the coda, ethos, fiat, et cetera of marriage, which demands obeisance to contractual obligations as pertains to yours truly (me), whose infidelity rent asunder the obligation to abide by the credo of lifelong commitment to one whose company (the missus) gradually became synchronized with mine.
May 30th, 2023 11:33
rew4er2nail said:
requited love manifests over time when the coda, ethos, fiat, et cetera of marriage, which demands obeisance to contractual obligations as pertains to yours truly (me), whose infidelity rent asunder the obligation to abide by the credo of lifelong commitment to one whose company (the missus) gradually became synchronized with mine.
May 30th, 2023 11:33
Bed of roses or thorns
nephilim56 said:
in simple terms i like it, the poem conveys its meaning clearly and precisely well done
May 30th, 2023 03:17
nephilim56 said:
in simple terms i like it, the poem conveys its meaning clearly and precisely well done
May 30th, 2023 03:17
Bed of roses or thorns
thinkerbell said:
Wonderful poem on love and marriage ...
May 29th, 2023 00:51
thinkerbell said:
Wonderful poem on love and marriage ...
May 29th, 2023 00:51
Squash the hate- hate bug
Firefall said:
I think this is one of my favorite poems that you wrote. It is so important that everyone stomp out hate where you see it and not allow ourselves to get caught up in resentments of others. Very special poem.
May 28th, 2023 15:33
Firefall said:
I think this is one of my favorite poems that you wrote. It is so important that everyone stomp out hate where you see it and not allow ourselves to get caught up in resentments of others. Very special poem.
May 28th, 2023 15:33
Bed of roses or thorns
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is the way to be in this world szk.
Andy
May 27th, 2023 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is the way to be in this world szk.
Andy
May 27th, 2023 01:16
Bed of roses or thorns
David Wakeling said:
I did find love once but it flew away like a scared parrot.The poem explores the irony of Love.Well done
May 26th, 2023 17:36
David Wakeling said:
I did find love once but it flew away like a scared parrot.The poem explores the irony of Love.Well done
May 26th, 2023 17:36
Bed of roses or thorns
Jeannie said:
I loved your poem very much. My husband & I dated in high school. We graduated and went our ways. 27 yrs later we found each other again. We\'ve been together 12 yrs and married for 2. So far this time, it has been roses. My first marriage was both roses and thorns. So I can relate to your poem extremely well
May 26th, 2023 14:54
Jeannie said:
I loved your poem very much. My husband & I dated in high school. We graduated and went our ways. 27 yrs later we found each other again. We\'ve been together 12 yrs and married for 2. So far this time, it has been roses. My first marriage was both roses and thorns. So I can relate to your poem extremely well
May 26th, 2023 14:54
Bed of roses or thorns
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet this is such a beautiul take on love everlasting. I can relate to the metaphor of a hose, sprinkling life giving water on the bed of roses. Love, like that bed must be cared for, that weeds may not overtake and prevent it from growing and flourishing. The gardner makes the commitment to always care for his plants, as do husband and wife to each other. Having been married to the same wonderful man for 53 years I can attest the the fact that continualy watering those roses pays off in beautiful blooms year after year. Love this write, it\'s a real fav.
May 26th, 2023 10:51
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet this is such a beautiul take on love everlasting. I can relate to the metaphor of a hose, sprinkling life giving water on the bed of roses. Love, like that bed must be cared for, that weeds may not overtake and prevent it from growing and flourishing. The gardner makes the commitment to always care for his plants, as do husband and wife to each other. Having been married to the same wonderful man for 53 years I can attest the the fact that continualy watering those roses pays off in beautiful blooms year after year. Love this write, it\'s a real fav.
May 26th, 2023 10:51
Bed of roses or thorns
Bobby O said:
Nice write. Good story. One small thought , that line “sprinkled from the hoses” seems out of place. It’s not a corny poem , it’s got substance. And maybe that line is corny?? Maybe try “is what our fate proposes” or almost anything else is better than sprinkled hoses. Change it. Or not ?
May 26th, 2023 06:43
Bobby O said:
Nice write. Good story. One small thought , that line “sprinkled from the hoses” seems out of place. It’s not a corny poem , it’s got substance. And maybe that line is corny?? Maybe try “is what our fate proposes” or almost anything else is better than sprinkled hoses. Change it. Or not ?
May 26th, 2023 06:43
View from an airplane window
Rocky Lagou said:
This is so marvelously depicted!
Dubai is breathtaking, and your descriptions are, too!
I love the way you described the scenery as \"poetic,\" a word you wouldn\'t usually attribute to something visual, but it\'s so apt in this context.
Thanks for this beautiful poem,
And Happy New Year!
January 9th, 2023 15:24
Rocky Lagou said:
This is so marvelously depicted!
Dubai is breathtaking, and your descriptions are, too!
I love the way you described the scenery as \"poetic,\" a word you wouldn\'t usually attribute to something visual, but it\'s so apt in this context.
Thanks for this beautiful poem,
And Happy New Year!
January 9th, 2023 15:24
View from an airplane window
AwHec8 said:
Sweet, Sweet, Sweet Poem you have there and I absolutely Love It! Ah the beauty of travel, especially when you’re seat has a windows view! Don
January 7th, 2023 11:58
AwHec8 said:
Sweet, Sweet, Sweet Poem you have there and I absolutely Love It! Ah the beauty of travel, especially when you’re seat has a windows view! Don
January 7th, 2023 11:58
Centipede scare
BoxMyHeart said:
Awesomely thoughtful reading yet again!
Have you any poems about your heritage or history? I think they would be interesting.
January 7th, 2023 08:24
BoxMyHeart said:
Awesomely thoughtful reading yet again!
Have you any poems about your heritage or history? I think they would be interesting.
January 7th, 2023 08:24
View from an airplane window
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, we need only elevate
our perspective\'s, point of view
to find all that wonder
that made our childhoods, such adventures..
wonderful enthusiasm, such evocative wording
thanks for sharing dear Poet
January 6th, 2023 04:08
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, we need only elevate
our perspective\'s, point of view
to find all that wonder
that made our childhoods, such adventures..
wonderful enthusiasm, such evocative wording
thanks for sharing dear Poet
January 6th, 2023 04:08
View from an airplane window
thinkerbell said:
In recent times even I\'ve undertaken a lot of air travel and your poem resonated with my feelings in an airplane...wonderful poetry🥰
January 2nd, 2023 01:34
thinkerbell said:
In recent times even I\'ve undertaken a lot of air travel and your poem resonated with my feelings in an airplane...wonderful poetry🥰
January 2nd, 2023 01:34
View from an airplane window
NafisaSB said:
this poem resonates with me because for the past few months have been constantly traveling, and i too have written poems on clouds which i will share in a few days, as again another trip calls..
beautifully expressed - keep on composing..cheers
January 1st, 2023 00:06
NafisaSB said:
this poem resonates with me because for the past few months have been constantly traveling, and i too have written poems on clouds which i will share in a few days, as again another trip calls..
beautifully expressed - keep on composing..cheers
January 1st, 2023 00:06
View from an airplane window
BlessedbyGod said:
Very beautiful,I couldn\'t agree with you more, November 16 was my first time in a plane and I love it also,I got Window seats both planes one somebody swapped with me
December 30th, 2022 19:40
BlessedbyGod said:
Very beautiful,I couldn\'t agree with you more, November 16 was my first time in a plane and I love it also,I got Window seats both planes one somebody swapped with me
December 30th, 2022 19:40
View from an airplane window
hzugman said:
Well done SZK. Reminds me of the last time I was in an airplane some two decades ago. Thanx for the memory. BTW my initials are HSZ (kinda close to yours).
December 30th, 2022 13:21
hzugman said:
Well done SZK. Reminds me of the last time I was in an airplane some two decades ago. Thanx for the memory. BTW my initials are HSZ (kinda close to yours).
December 30th, 2022 13:21
Telly trouble and dangers
Bella Shepard said:
While there are a myriad of forces working against our children in the world today, I can speak somewhat to the gun violence in my own country, the USA. We have a gun lobby, specifically the National Rifle Association, that lobbies our congress to protect gun rights. In other words they are making a lot of money off of gun sales and want to keep things just as they are. The numbers of mass shootings we have each year is unprecedented, and yet each time they preach the same old gospel of more guns for everyone\'s protection. The majority of the American people want reasonable gun legislation, however the gun manufacturers and NRA lobby our congress, donate huge sums of money, and have enough politicians in their pocket to keep any form of reasonable gun legislation from ever happening. Ulvade is the most recent heartbreaking, devastating, unconscionable, act of violence committed against children, and yet it still isn\'t enough to bring about change. Pray for us, for the people seem to have less and less voice as time goes on. I applaud your courage in tackling this difficult subject, and starting a conversation. If we don\'t talk, nothing happens.
December 29th, 2022 17:44
Bella Shepard said:
While there are a myriad of forces working against our children in the world today, I can speak somewhat to the gun violence in my own country, the USA. We have a gun lobby, specifically the National Rifle Association, that lobbies our congress to protect gun rights. In other words they are making a lot of money off of gun sales and want to keep things just as they are. The numbers of mass shootings we have each year is unprecedented, and yet each time they preach the same old gospel of more guns for everyone\'s protection. The majority of the American people want reasonable gun legislation, however the gun manufacturers and NRA lobby our congress, donate huge sums of money, and have enough politicians in their pocket to keep any form of reasonable gun legislation from ever happening. Ulvade is the most recent heartbreaking, devastating, unconscionable, act of violence committed against children, and yet it still isn\'t enough to bring about change. Pray for us, for the people seem to have less and less voice as time goes on. I applaud your courage in tackling this difficult subject, and starting a conversation. If we don\'t talk, nothing happens.
December 29th, 2022 17:44
View from an airplane window
Fay Slimm. said:
You capture so well the thrill of flight over mountains and valleys and compare with good rhyme all the differing sizes when looking down from great height at people and towns. A poem to read over again dear poet so this one goes into my list of favourites and thank you for sharing your your \"view from an airplane window\".
December 29th, 2022 17:27
Fay Slimm. said:
You capture so well the thrill of flight over mountains and valleys and compare with good rhyme all the differing sizes when looking down from great height at people and towns. A poem to read over again dear poet so this one goes into my list of favourites and thank you for sharing your your \"view from an airplane window\".
December 29th, 2022 17:27
View from an airplane window
BoxMyHeart said:
This is a beauty of a poem.
Reminding us that we are so small. In the grand scheme of this generous and ginormous earth.
:)
December 29th, 2022 14:31
BoxMyHeart said:
This is a beauty of a poem.
Reminding us that we are so small. In the grand scheme of this generous and ginormous earth.
:)
December 29th, 2022 14:31
View from an airplane window
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful poem dear poet. The rhyming scheme flows so peacefully and lyrically. Seen from afar, our world is breathtaking. Thank you for sharing this wonderful view in verse!
December 29th, 2022 12:31
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful poem dear poet. The rhyming scheme flows so peacefully and lyrically. Seen from afar, our world is breathtaking. Thank you for sharing this wonderful view in verse!
December 29th, 2022 12:31
Autumnal ceremony
Crowns4Christ said:
Very beautiful my friend I can imagine it in my mind\'s eye,you paint a very beautiful picture and story
November 17th, 2022 03:48
Crowns4Christ said:
Very beautiful my friend I can imagine it in my mind\'s eye,you paint a very beautiful picture and story
November 17th, 2022 03:48
Centipede scare
rrodriguez said:
Excellent! I read the poem with my grandson giving a suspenseful twist.
November 10th, 2022 15:02
rrodriguez said:
Excellent! I read the poem with my grandson giving a suspenseful twist.
November 10th, 2022 15:02
Autumnal ceremony
rrodriguez said:
The imagery is spectacular. The use of alliteration is awesome!
November 10th, 2022 14:57
rrodriguez said:
The imagery is spectacular. The use of alliteration is awesome!
November 10th, 2022 14:57
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