Comments received on poems by Elizabeth



me flower
space_girl said:

What a beautiful poem :)

January 5th, 2018 16:59

to who it may concern
swingline said:

I would say this concerns everyone and their cat , dog , and the pet goldfish named Ralph .

May 3rd, 2017 10:51

alone
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good emotive write.

April 15th, 2017 00:49

alone
Shayl said:

sad but i like it this write.

April 14th, 2017 13:51

Bully
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, bullies are just cowards. They want a response from you and this is where you can find the best weapon to use against them is apathy.

April 14th, 2017 00:12

Bully
Pls JUST LISTEN!!!!!! said:

I like your poem. I don\'t like being bullied but i understand the reason most persons do it. They have some emotional battle inside themselves they are fighting. Wheather they dont get love so they try to get power or that they are just giving off what they get or because they are consider useless by people(which is not nice) so they want others to feel useless to. Soo yes they are bullies, i get picked on every day by one but i understand her situation and still converse with her even though it gets her more mad. Bullies are lost puppies needing a home and a sprinkle of love and sunshine.

April 13th, 2017 19:21

Bully
Gino said:

Nice writing. Bullies never give up, until you do something about it...

April 13th, 2017 12:41

Stay?
Alethia said:

Good poem. Sad story. Be strong!

April 12th, 2017 14:35

Stay?
Hopey_xx said:

I know the feeling of believing people like that. Great write. I\'m here if you need to talk about anything.

April 12th, 2017 14:17

Stay?
Angel Smileyface said:

nice write but dont believe what people say about you its not worth it theres this girl that keeps trying to get me to fight her but i cant as much as i want to she talks crap on me all the time and yeah it gets old but you gotta know your better than them

April 12th, 2017 13:12

Remembered pain...
ron parrish aka wordman said:

touching write

April 11th, 2017 20:46

Remembered pain...
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME ELIZABETH (lovely name) Thanks for you poem ~ which resonates with most of us on MPS. Sometimes in each of our lives the pain seems so great ~ that we contemplate death as the only way out. Some people have actually chosen to die simultaneously ~ with a friend. Thanks for sharing your very Gothic poem ~ scary ! Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN

April 11th, 2017 15:29

Remembered pain...
Aamina said:

I like the rhyme and rhythm

April 11th, 2017 15:12