Comments received on poems by kiersten



Anniversary
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive write.

April 17th, 2017 00:42

Everlasting Love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME KIERSTEN ~ Thank you for your first poem ~ which poses many questions but (like all unrequited love poems) provides few answers ! I love the elegant structure of your poem ~ five neat quatrains in rhyming couplets ~ my fave rhyming pattern. Since being a Teen (a few years ago !) I have fallen IN & OUT of LOVE several times and parting is always \"such sweet sorrow\" ! The content and message of your poem will resonate in many of our Members hearts ! My current GF and I are very compatible and our love is as TRUE as it can be ~ but EVERLASTING ? only time will tell ! My philosophy is (despite the Agony & Ecstasy of being in and out of Love) is better to have Loved & Lost than never to have loved at all\' I have always learned something positive fro all my relationships with a variety of Ladies ! Thanks for sharing and caring ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.

April 12th, 2017 05:15

Everlasting Love
elchupacabra said:

This made me feel a lot...We love and we lose. But people have always done that. I am no optimist but I can assure you it\'s impossible to love without the ability to lose something, just like it\'s impossible to live without the ability to die. Flawed and complex doesn\'t mean bad.

April 11th, 2017 20:51

Everlasting Love
ron parrish aka wordman said:

ahh ! it is real,you just need to know where to find it

April 11th, 2017 20:45

Everlasting Love
brandon k f said:

Very emotive, good first poem

April 11th, 2017 20:31