Comments received on poems by brianna jean zeiger
biologically in love
edwinknox said:
A nerdy spin on a typical love poem, genius! I loved it
April 6th, 2018 20:54
edwinknox said:
A nerdy spin on a typical love poem, genius! I loved it
April 6th, 2018 20:54
painted red
Jamie said:
You\'re the real painter, Brii. A great painting with words.
March 9th, 2018 16:10
Jamie said:
You\'re the real painter, Brii. A great painting with words.
March 9th, 2018 16:10
painted red
Lorna said:
Very powerful poem which I hope never happened to you.............
March 9th, 2018 11:27
Lorna said:
Very powerful poem which I hope never happened to you.............
March 9th, 2018 11:27
teenage years
Lorna said:
Living hell............ poor children of today...... if they grab the reins can they make the world better in the future!
February 26th, 2018 06:34
Lorna said:
Living hell............ poor children of today...... if they grab the reins can they make the world better in the future!
February 26th, 2018 06:34
teenage years
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hello, this is a well written piece of writing .. it think it can be a difficult time of life , for some people anyhow . x
February 26th, 2018 05:50
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hello, this is a well written piece of writing .. it think it can be a difficult time of life , for some people anyhow . x
February 26th, 2018 05:50
insomniac
P.X. Vexxus said:
I can relate to this, in a sense. I have a hard time getting to sleep, lying awake for hours at a time before eventually succumbing to exhaustion. Once I fall asleep, I sleep normally, I think. On a second note, after reading your profile, I think I could help you improve your writing, if that is what you seek. Thanks for sharing! ~
May 9th, 2017 00:26
P.X. Vexxus said:
I can relate to this, in a sense. I have a hard time getting to sleep, lying awake for hours at a time before eventually succumbing to exhaustion. Once I fall asleep, I sleep normally, I think. On a second note, after reading your profile, I think I could help you improve your writing, if that is what you seek. Thanks for sharing! ~
May 9th, 2017 00:26
insomniac
LML said:
I can feel your frustration and anixiy in your poem. It is well written and I love your rimes
I\'ve been threw a lot to. The one thing that helps me with mine eating dis. is I make soothies. I blend various frozen fruits with a banana & oatmeal (add water).
There are Camille tea pills they make me relax. You can also make the tea and mix it with apple juice to give it a sweet flavor.
Keep writing, ur good at it & it helps❤️
May 8th, 2017 23:40
LML said:
I can feel your frustration and anixiy in your poem. It is well written and I love your rimes
I\'ve been threw a lot to. The one thing that helps me with mine eating dis. is I make soothies. I blend various frozen fruits with a banana & oatmeal (add water).
There are Camille tea pills they make me relax. You can also make the tea and mix it with apple juice to give it a sweet flavor.
Keep writing, ur good at it & it helps❤️
May 8th, 2017 23:40
insomniac
swingline said:
When it becomes a disorder treatment needs to be done . I lost my thyroid to cancer 17 years ago . The thyroid regulates your bodies chemistry and without synthetic hormone replacement I would not be able to sleep and eventually go insane .Every so often I have to stop taking my synthroid to let the body sort of reset . After two weeks I\'m hearing voices , seeing things and it\'s impossible to sleep .Sleep is precious .
May 8th, 2017 20:40
swingline said:
When it becomes a disorder treatment needs to be done . I lost my thyroid to cancer 17 years ago . The thyroid regulates your bodies chemistry and without synthetic hormone replacement I would not be able to sleep and eventually go insane .Every so often I have to stop taking my synthroid to let the body sort of reset . After two weeks I\'m hearing voices , seeing things and it\'s impossible to sleep .Sleep is precious .
May 8th, 2017 20:40
Hi, I\'m Fat!
John Lee said:
Great poem, be proud of it. It\'s from your heart, and written beautifully. I can feel the emotions behind each line. And nevermind what some mindless asshole thinks, you didn\'t need him anyway. You\'re off to do greater things without him!
April 19th, 2017 07:25
John Lee said:
Great poem, be proud of it. It\'s from your heart, and written beautifully. I can feel the emotions behind each line. And nevermind what some mindless asshole thinks, you didn\'t need him anyway. You\'re off to do greater things without him!
April 19th, 2017 07:25
Hi, I\'m Fat!
Hopey_xx said:
I see so many girls my age who have completely done whatever they can to live up to \'the standards\'. I\'m glad that you got the help you needed! Thanks for sharing
April 19th, 2017 03:36
Hopey_xx said:
I see so many girls my age who have completely done whatever they can to live up to \'the standards\'. I\'m glad that you got the help you needed! Thanks for sharing
April 19th, 2017 03:36
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