Comments received on poems by Noveyre
Orchid\'s Wings
Ethan said:
I must say, it is a good idea. However, clarity is lost in your syntax. Try moving around words in your sentences. For instance, I\'m not sure what the first sentence means. Are you trying to say, \"What would I\"?
June 4th, 2017 11:47
Ethan said:
I must say, it is a good idea. However, clarity is lost in your syntax. Try moving around words in your sentences. For instance, I\'m not sure what the first sentence means. Are you trying to say, \"What would I\"?
June 4th, 2017 11:47
Colors of the Ocean
swingline said:
I used to sail and this really rings true for me . Excellent poem .
May 13th, 2017 22:11
swingline said:
I used to sail and this really rings true for me . Excellent poem .
May 13th, 2017 22:11
The Novel in the Attic
LML said:
Awsome! I\'ve always wanted to find an old book like this. Where I\'d blow off the dust and find an AMAZING true life story of someone long ago
April 30th, 2017 18:36
LML said:
Awsome! I\'ve always wanted to find an old book like this. Where I\'d blow off the dust and find an AMAZING true life story of someone long ago
April 30th, 2017 18:36
Rain in the evening
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME NOVEYRE ~ Thank you for your first poem. It is well structured into five balanced quatrains ~ replete with rhyme & rhythm. I love the content ~ nothing can complete with the unique smell (petrichor) in the countryside ~ after a recent shower of rain ! Please check my poems ~ Yours ~ BRIAN (UK)
April 29th, 2017 19:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME NOVEYRE ~ Thank you for your first poem. It is well structured into five balanced quatrains ~ replete with rhyme & rhythm. I love the content ~ nothing can complete with the unique smell (petrichor) in the countryside ~ after a recent shower of rain ! Please check my poems ~ Yours ~ BRIAN (UK)
April 29th, 2017 19:09
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