Comments received on poems by Noveyre
Tall Trees, Standing Still
Bobby O said:
Nice write. You , I’m sure, have reasons or a plan to leave the rancor and regret that seeps through through the slight tilt of phrase , ie; “ chill biting into bark skin” or maybe I’ve overloaded on motive and your rally is against indifference ? I hope there is a sequel that notarizes.
May 17th, 2023 23:30
Bobby O said:
Nice write. You , I’m sure, have reasons or a plan to leave the rancor and regret that seeps through through the slight tilt of phrase , ie; “ chill biting into bark skin” or maybe I’ve overloaded on motive and your rally is against indifference ? I hope there is a sequel that notarizes.
May 17th, 2023 23:30
Stranger Empathy
Eugene S. said:
Really interesting wordplay. I know it\'s personal, but also abstract - almost visually abstract. Definitely left an impression...
March 13th, 2023 18:34
Eugene S. said:
Really interesting wordplay. I know it\'s personal, but also abstract - almost visually abstract. Definitely left an impression...
March 13th, 2023 18:34
Soft Dream
L. B. Mek said:
\'Candle in the dark unknown
it doesn\'t chase the shadows away- it just allows me to see them-\'
insightful, imagery
a good read, thanks for sharing
February 6th, 2023 05:28
L. B. Mek said:
\'Candle in the dark unknown
it doesn\'t chase the shadows away- it just allows me to see them-\'
insightful, imagery
a good read, thanks for sharing
February 6th, 2023 05:28
Paperbacks & Paper-Sound
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully poignant poetry, utilising arrowed imagery and seamless flow..
a joy to read, thanks for sharing
March 3rd, 2022 04:52
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully poignant poetry, utilising arrowed imagery and seamless flow..
a joy to read, thanks for sharing
March 3rd, 2022 04:52
Lavender Egress
Eugene S. said:
Bravo!!👏 A beautifully worded and engaging poem!
January 16th, 2022 18:30
Eugene S. said:
Bravo!!👏 A beautifully worded and engaging poem!
January 16th, 2022 18:30
The Bedtime Bees
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Fun interesting read !🙂
September 10th, 2021 04:26
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Fun interesting read !🙂
September 10th, 2021 04:26
The Bedtime Bees
L. B. Mek said:
a poetic concept that would have never come to me, intriguing to say the least
wonderful imagery, thanks for sharing
September 10th, 2021 04:25
L. B. Mek said:
a poetic concept that would have never come to me, intriguing to say the least
wonderful imagery, thanks for sharing
September 10th, 2021 04:25
The River & The Monster
L. B. Mek said:
\'I bring up my palms while in that crypt,
lift them up and myself by extension,
swimming up to the river\'s silt and knelt\'
wonderful imagery and insightful
subtle, in choosing to bravely celebrate
our life\'s: Rivers of Hope
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 6th, 2021 04:08
L. B. Mek said:
\'I bring up my palms while in that crypt,
lift them up and myself by extension,
swimming up to the river\'s silt and knelt\'
wonderful imagery and insightful
subtle, in choosing to bravely celebrate
our life\'s: Rivers of Hope
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 6th, 2021 04:08
The River & The Monster
Freni Karaluthara said:
I reply beneath blue sky
informing to the nothing-
\"The embers tend to strangling
but the water teaches swimming.\"
beautiful poem
August 6th, 2021 03:46
Freni Karaluthara said:
I reply beneath blue sky
informing to the nothing-
\"The embers tend to strangling
but the water teaches swimming.\"
beautiful poem
August 6th, 2021 03:46
Love Poem For a Cloud
L. B. Mek said:
\'You, a stranger,
a curl of white
against the blue
that keeps me behind\'
wonderfully poetic, a great read
November 20th, 2020 04:24
L. B. Mek said:
\'You, a stranger,
a curl of white
against the blue
that keeps me behind\'
wonderfully poetic, a great read
November 20th, 2020 04:24
Love Poem For a Cloud
Goldfinch60 said:
Each cloud is unique and one but that one that you picked will be forever in your heart.
Andy
November 20th, 2020 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Each cloud is unique and one but that one that you picked will be forever in your heart.
Andy
November 20th, 2020 01:24
Lilac Night
Jeremy Leach said:
Well written and I love the imagery. It\'s atmospheric and I can imagine those colours and the scale of the scene.
June 18th, 2020 23:32
Jeremy Leach said:
Well written and I love the imagery. It\'s atmospheric and I can imagine those colours and the scale of the scene.
June 18th, 2020 23:32
Little Old Factory
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words, may your teaching be seen by all.
August 31st, 2019 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words, may your teaching be seen by all.
August 31st, 2019 00:29
The Bunnies’ Grove
Nicholas Browning said:
Kind of a sad, melancholic read. A perfect one to set the mood today.
March 13th, 2019 15:39
Nicholas Browning said:
Kind of a sad, melancholic read. A perfect one to set the mood today.
March 13th, 2019 15:39
Morning Porridge
Netashi said:
Very nice poem, very detailed and felt calming. I think the morning is the best time of day but I\'ve been growing fond of the night recently. Keep up the good writing.
-Theta
November 6th, 2018 13:45
Netashi said:
Very nice poem, very detailed and felt calming. I think the morning is the best time of day but I\'ve been growing fond of the night recently. Keep up the good writing.
-Theta
November 6th, 2018 13:45
What Lies Beneath the Cresting Blue
Goldfinch60 said:
You have taken me to this magical place with your words.
October 1st, 2018 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
You have taken me to this magical place with your words.
October 1st, 2018 00:51
Pondering Promenade
Crystal Hope said:
Such a fantastic piece. Really liked your title
August 18th, 2018 00:22
Crystal Hope said:
Such a fantastic piece. Really liked your title
August 18th, 2018 00:22
Cat Days
Daveyboyz said:
Kittens asleep on knees really is the stuff of poetry, I like your folded cloth sky too.
April 7th, 2018 05:26
Daveyboyz said:
Kittens asleep on knees really is the stuff of poetry, I like your folded cloth sky too.
April 7th, 2018 05:26
Cat Days
Lorna said:
Very good image of a bleak and dreary day.... you had me wanting that \"hot drink\" - absolutely a day for staying in........
April 7th, 2018 04:30
Lorna said:
Very good image of a bleak and dreary day.... you had me wanting that \"hot drink\" - absolutely a day for staying in........
April 7th, 2018 04:30
But The Rain Still Asks
Lorna said:
Such great lines in this poem - \"ponder themselves to puddles\"...... brilliant!
March 21st, 2018 04:03
Lorna said:
Such great lines in this poem - \"ponder themselves to puddles\"...... brilliant!
March 21st, 2018 04:03
The Moon Wanders
Aislinn Wilson said:
Purely magical and immersive. I really enjoy this. Can I ask if this has a specific inspiration behind it?
January 15th, 2018 19:40
Aislinn Wilson said:
Purely magical and immersive. I really enjoy this. Can I ask if this has a specific inspiration behind it?
January 15th, 2018 19:40
Lively 22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great write! “and black powder here to besmirch my grin”...love that line! Thanks for sharing
January 9th, 2018 21:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great write! “and black powder here to besmirch my grin”...love that line! Thanks for sharing
January 9th, 2018 21:46
Feathers in The Freezing
Laedie Willacaw said:
Absolutely stunning. Keep up the great work. ♡
January 7th, 2018 17:49
Laedie Willacaw said:
Absolutely stunning. Keep up the great work. ♡
January 7th, 2018 17:49
Autumn Allure
Brycycle said:
I quite liked this, it was somehow, refreshing to read. And i thank you for that.
August 31st, 2017 14:11
Brycycle said:
I quite liked this, it was somehow, refreshing to read. And i thank you for that.
August 31st, 2017 14:11
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