Comments received on poems by scary-mary
Cowgirls
Lorna said:
There is nothing like a horse.............from one who knows..........
October 15th, 2020 05:33
Lorna said:
There is nothing like a horse.............from one who knows..........
October 15th, 2020 05:33
So sorry
Neville said:
this reads like a desperate plea.... I hope I am wrong... but liked by me regardless.......................................
Neville
August 7th, 2019 07:15
Neville said:
this reads like a desperate plea.... I hope I am wrong... but liked by me regardless.......................................
Neville
August 7th, 2019 07:15
Death becomes
dusk arising said:
So when the cross dresser in front of his flock says \"peace be apon you\" its just another load of rhetorical dual speak.
Nice one.
April 26th, 2019 10:29
dusk arising said:
So when the cross dresser in front of his flock says \"peace be apon you\" its just another load of rhetorical dual speak.
Nice one.
April 26th, 2019 10:29
My magic show
Noah Malice said:
I feel like this starts really strong but loses it on the last line due to the repetition. I think perhaps if you cut the last line or changed it, it would be stronger. Otherwise I actually love this write.
June 12th, 2018 09:37
Noah Malice said:
I feel like this starts really strong but loses it on the last line due to the repetition. I think perhaps if you cut the last line or changed it, it would be stronger. Otherwise I actually love this write.
June 12th, 2018 09:37
Beat your own drum
lasergraph said:
Good write and good advice. Always be true to yourself.
May 9th, 2018 15:10
lasergraph said:
Good write and good advice. Always be true to yourself.
May 9th, 2018 15:10
Christmas dreams on
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SM ~ He works harder than Amazon in December visiting 2 billion Homes ! BUT he then has 11 Months Holiday (January to November) so plenty of time for His Family who get their presents on the 6th of JANUARY ~ the visit of the MAGI ~ OK ~ Yours BRIAN. Please check my Poems ~ I too have a CHRISTMAS ONE TODAY ~ Thanks B.
November 13th, 2017 17:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SM ~ He works harder than Amazon in December visiting 2 billion Homes ! BUT he then has 11 Months Holiday (January to November) so plenty of time for His Family who get their presents on the 6th of JANUARY ~ the visit of the MAGI ~ OK ~ Yours BRIAN. Please check my Poems ~ I too have a CHRISTMAS ONE TODAY ~ Thanks B.
November 13th, 2017 17:08
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swingline said:
One of those poems that is shorter and purer than any comment could every be .
June 15th, 2017 08:39
swingline said:
One of those poems that is shorter and purer than any comment could every be .
June 15th, 2017 08:39
No title
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MARY ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ A 3~5~5 mini~Haiku ~ beautiful ! In the UK Summer has come early 70+ F in the South ! Summer Days are wonderful but ~ like you ~ it is the Summer nights I remember most ! You will enjoy MPS it is a very friendly site ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
May 25th, 2017 07:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MARY ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ A 3~5~5 mini~Haiku ~ beautiful ! In the UK Summer has come early 70+ F in the South ! Summer Days are wonderful but ~ like you ~ it is the Summer nights I remember most ! You will enjoy MPS it is a very friendly site ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
May 25th, 2017 07:48
