Comments received on poems by little lay lay
An Entry + Someone Else
Louis Gibbs said:
Expressing ourselves through poetry is a great way to learn who we are, Bianca. It can be very therapeutic.
May 30th, 2017 07:53
Louis Gibbs said:
Expressing ourselves through poetry is a great way to learn who we are, Bianca. It can be very therapeutic.
May 30th, 2017 07:53
An Entry + Someone Else
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Welcome BIANCA ~ Thank you for an intriguing duo of poems. For all of us LIFE is a Roller Coaster ~ on day up ~ the next down (I prefer to be up !) we can be hungry ~ thirsty ~ lonely and unloved ~ BUT ~ w keep breathing ! Provided our lungs are working the AIR we breath is free ~ and just the right composition 79% N 20% O and 1% CO2 ~ noble gasses etc ! Your poem highlights the importance of respiration and ~ when all else fails ~ we must BREATH or PERISH. We can survive 3 weeks without FOOD ~ 3 days without WATER ~ but only 3 minutes without BREATHING (OXYGEN) ! Thanks for SHARING ~ Yours Brian (UK) Please check my poems ~ Yours B.
May 30th, 2017 07:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Welcome BIANCA ~ Thank you for an intriguing duo of poems. For all of us LIFE is a Roller Coaster ~ on day up ~ the next down (I prefer to be up !) we can be hungry ~ thirsty ~ lonely and unloved ~ BUT ~ w keep breathing ! Provided our lungs are working the AIR we breath is free ~ and just the right composition 79% N 20% O and 1% CO2 ~ noble gasses etc ! Your poem highlights the importance of respiration and ~ when all else fails ~ we must BREATH or PERISH. We can survive 3 weeks without FOOD ~ 3 days without WATER ~ but only 3 minutes without BREATHING (OXYGEN) ! Thanks for SHARING ~ Yours Brian (UK) Please check my poems ~ Yours B.
May 30th, 2017 07:43
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