Comments received on poems by Ethan
Inconsistent Consistency
Michael Edwards said:
I also love \'playing\' with words and this is a great example even if a bit convoluted - but the \'message\' is clear - when you\'re dead you\'re dead. As an atheist that\'s easy for me to say but others?
June 6th, 2017 00:14
Michael Edwards said:
I also love \'playing\' with words and this is a great example even if a bit convoluted - but the \'message\' is clear - when you\'re dead you\'re dead. As an atheist that\'s easy for me to say but others?
June 6th, 2017 00:14
Inconsistent Consistency
The Invisible said:
I like your word choice. Yeah I somewhat agree it\'s really college area but I understand were you coming from. It does give the poem a sort of meaning of it\'s own with how death is death and there\'s no way we can escape it. But I don\'t know I just met you, but the writing just kind of in my eyes doesn\'t sound like you. Like I get it\'s death but it\'s also expressing how you view death in your own mind and in this it kind of seems like you let him take over.. If that makes sense lol. Overall, you did good.
June 5th, 2017 13:37
The Invisible said:
I like your word choice. Yeah I somewhat agree it\'s really college area but I understand were you coming from. It does give the poem a sort of meaning of it\'s own with how death is death and there\'s no way we can escape it. But I don\'t know I just met you, but the writing just kind of in my eyes doesn\'t sound like you. Like I get it\'s death but it\'s also expressing how you view death in your own mind and in this it kind of seems like you let him take over.. If that makes sense lol. Overall, you did good.
June 5th, 2017 13:37
Inconsistent Consistency
thehippiepoet said:
I almost made a comment on the overuse of the longer words but the fact that you did it on purpose to add meaning is great
June 5th, 2017 11:19
thehippiepoet said:
I almost made a comment on the overuse of the longer words but the fact that you did it on purpose to add meaning is great
June 5th, 2017 11:19
A Narrative Snare
The Invisible said:
Great stuff. You are very skillful, how old are you anyway?
June 4th, 2017 21:58
The Invisible said:
Great stuff. You are very skillful, how old are you anyway?
June 4th, 2017 21:58
Nugatory
The Invisible said:
Wow you can write. Keep it up, I wish to read more.
June 4th, 2017 19:49
The Invisible said:
Wow you can write. Keep it up, I wish to read more.
June 4th, 2017 19:49
A Narrative Snare
Saima said:
This is confusing in a good way, nice use of language its amazing
June 4th, 2017 19:45
Saima said:
This is confusing in a good way, nice use of language its amazing
June 4th, 2017 19:45
A Narrative Snare
MaddieJ said:
What a nice piece. Good job! Love your depth and metaphors.
June 4th, 2017 17:48
MaddieJ said:
What a nice piece. Good job! Love your depth and metaphors.
June 4th, 2017 17:48
A Narrative Snare
Michael Edwards said:
Great imagery - an accomplished piece of work.
June 4th, 2017 09:53
Michael Edwards said:
Great imagery - an accomplished piece of work.
June 4th, 2017 09:53
Nugatory
kevin browne said:
I found extracting myself from gloomy situations throughout my life not only set me free from surrounding negative thought but actually begin to understand that the reflection of others images, in fact, causes the damage upon your own soul. stay away from those people\'s reflections and concentrate on the man in the mirror. create your own existence in life and never forget, be in the places you know best. you have written a good and deep meaningful piece of work here. keep it coming x
June 4th, 2017 07:01
kevin browne said:
I found extracting myself from gloomy situations throughout my life not only set me free from surrounding negative thought but actually begin to understand that the reflection of others images, in fact, causes the damage upon your own soul. stay away from those people\'s reflections and concentrate on the man in the mirror. create your own existence in life and never forget, be in the places you know best. you have written a good and deep meaningful piece of work here. keep it coming x
June 4th, 2017 07:01
A Narrative Snare
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - the snare we as poets have to see and escape from - a great piece of appealing imagery with its wise message to writers all. Good read Ethan.
June 4th, 2017 06:03
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - the snare we as poets have to see and escape from - a great piece of appealing imagery with its wise message to writers all. Good read Ethan.
June 4th, 2017 06:03
Nugatory
MaddieJ said:
Can really relate to some of the conflict you speak of. Great writing and welcome to the site! I am new too!
June 3rd, 2017 23:03
MaddieJ said:
Can really relate to some of the conflict you speak of. Great writing and welcome to the site! I am new too!
June 3rd, 2017 23:03
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