Comments received on poems by Lily_
Lifetime
myself and me said:
\"I never went looking
I found you--
Here.\"
Such a beautiful writing about a true love. I love it.
August 22nd, 2017 19:45
myself and me said:
\"I never went looking
I found you--
Here.\"
Such a beautiful writing about a true love. I love it.
August 22nd, 2017 19:45
Let Go
FredPeyer said:
I do like your poem, Silk. Not only because it is well written, but also because it could have been written here in Hawaii. I grow Aloe Vera in my garden, and the beaches and tides are not far away. Don\'t want to be washed out though! :-)
July 21st, 2017 02:05
FredPeyer said:
I do like your poem, Silk. Not only because it is well written, but also because it could have been written here in Hawaii. I grow Aloe Vera in my garden, and the beaches and tides are not far away. Don\'t want to be washed out though! :-)
July 21st, 2017 02:05
Just Static
Heather T said:
Very nice! I like your form. You\'ve expressed this void well.
July 18th, 2017 23:28
Heather T said:
Very nice! I like your form. You\'ve expressed this void well.
July 18th, 2017 23:28
Just Static
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem is a fine presentation of feeling numb, expressionless, uncreative ... yet you created a worthy poem. Well done, Silk!
July 18th, 2017 22:32
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem is a fine presentation of feeling numb, expressionless, uncreative ... yet you created a worthy poem. Well done, Silk!
July 18th, 2017 22:32
Dipped In Dialect
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, painting with words is what many of us do but painting can also do things that words cannot do. Both are wonderful
Welcome to MPS.
June 6th, 2017 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, painting with words is what many of us do but painting can also do things that words cannot do. Both are wonderful
Welcome to MPS.
June 6th, 2017 01:28
Dipped In Dialect
UnknownCypher said:
wow, i love the imagery i get by reading your words. well done.
June 5th, 2017 18:18
UnknownCypher said:
wow, i love the imagery i get by reading your words. well done.
June 5th, 2017 18:18
Dipped In Dialect
ElenaGrace said:
This is really really good. Your choice of words and the what you\'re saying overall. Great job:)
June 5th, 2017 13:24
ElenaGrace said:
This is really really good. Your choice of words and the what you\'re saying overall. Great job:)
June 5th, 2017 13:24
Dipped In Dialect
Ethan said:
Very good. I like the negative connotations given to paint. Also, I think you mean lose instead of loose in the third to last line.
June 5th, 2017 13:23
Ethan said:
Very good. I like the negative connotations given to paint. Also, I think you mean lose instead of loose in the third to last line.
June 5th, 2017 13:23
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