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Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Very expressive .. good poem .. I like your choice of words
August 17th, 2021 10:43
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Very expressive .. good poem .. I like your choice of words
August 17th, 2021 10:43
Haunted
L. B. Mek said:
\'But it doesn\'t even come close
to the psychological warfare
The stereo turned up too high
So the neighbors couldn\'t hear
A strong blow to the forehead
But I don\'t care
Because I cant feel\'..
its, simply a joy to read the veracity of truth
imbued in your words, dear Poet
so relatable and accessible, a great read!
July 1st, 2021 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'But it doesn\'t even come close
to the psychological warfare
The stereo turned up too high
So the neighbors couldn\'t hear
A strong blow to the forehead
But I don\'t care
Because I cant feel\'..
its, simply a joy to read the veracity of truth
imbued in your words, dear Poet
so relatable and accessible, a great read!
July 1st, 2021 04:10
Haunted
Doggerel Dave said:
You got out but obsessive thoughts and dreams plague you?
They more then likely will diminish over time with distractions resulting from your new life. If not - seek professional help.
In the meantime you have provided us with a well crafted work which brings to the fore the topic of domestic violence.
July 1st, 2021 00:44
Doggerel Dave said:
You got out but obsessive thoughts and dreams plague you?
They more then likely will diminish over time with distractions resulting from your new life. If not - seek professional help.
In the meantime you have provided us with a well crafted work which brings to the fore the topic of domestic violence.
July 1st, 2021 00:44
Haunted
Saxon Crow said:
Ouch. What a frank and realistic poem Lily. It cuts to the core
July 1st, 2021 00:36
Saxon Crow said:
Ouch. What a frank and realistic poem Lily. It cuts to the core
July 1st, 2021 00:36
Haunted
Goldfinch60 said:
Any sort of abuse both physical and mental must be stopped. If there is love there why is abuse there as well.
Very emotive write Lily.
Andy
July 1st, 2021 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Any sort of abuse both physical and mental must be stopped. If there is love there why is abuse there as well.
Very emotive write Lily.
Andy
July 1st, 2021 00:32
Exclusive Solitude
L. B. Mek said:
awesome!
such a joy to read
showcasing that simple fluency
in Poetry\'s intuitive empathy of relatability..
thank you for sharing, dear poet
June 24th, 2021 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
awesome!
such a joy to read
showcasing that simple fluency
in Poetry\'s intuitive empathy of relatability..
thank you for sharing, dear poet
June 24th, 2021 04:54
The sun will rise on me
Jayasree said:
I felt so sad reading it. Hope you are getting over whatever happened to you. God bless.
June 16th, 2021 06:10
Jayasree said:
I felt so sad reading it. Hope you are getting over whatever happened to you. God bless.
June 16th, 2021 06:10
Perfect
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words show the real you as words do for many of us when we write poetry.
Andy
June 16th, 2021 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words show the real you as words do for many of us when we write poetry.
Andy
June 16th, 2021 00:38
Perfect
dusk arising said:
If ever there was a place to explore under the skin and let it all hang out, then the company of poets is surely that place. MyPoeticSide is a place where I am real and not my other world facade erected for self protection - and it\'s not just me.
Feel safe.
June 15th, 2021 18:03
dusk arising said:
If ever there was a place to explore under the skin and let it all hang out, then the company of poets is surely that place. MyPoeticSide is a place where I am real and not my other world facade erected for self protection - and it\'s not just me.
Feel safe.
June 15th, 2021 18:03
At Arms Length
Goldfinch60 said:
That \'me\' has become a realisation and you can now move on into a new and better life which has been waiting for you.
Andy
April 20th, 2021 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
That \'me\' has become a realisation and you can now move on into a new and better life which has been waiting for you.
Andy
April 20th, 2021 00:33
If I could now
L. B. Mek said:
\'Finger print bruises on my waist
From the dance we used to do
you catch a frozen heart staring in the mirror,
covering her face in concealer,
Still- with the numbness from you,\'..
a good read, thanks for sharing
April 1st, 2021 06:01
L. B. Mek said:
\'Finger print bruises on my waist
From the dance we used to do
you catch a frozen heart staring in the mirror,
covering her face in concealer,
Still- with the numbness from you,\'..
a good read, thanks for sharing
April 1st, 2021 06:01
If I could now
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dreams may be done but I ma sure that there will be new wonderful dreams that will come true.
Andy
April 1st, 2021 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dreams may be done but I ma sure that there will be new wonderful dreams that will come true.
Andy
April 1st, 2021 00:37
The sun will rise on me
dusk arising said:
Hello Silk. Poetry is a great way of expressing angst and deep emotional stuff. Here we are a mixed bag of accomplished poets and recovering souls finding release in our outpourings and the outpourings of others.
For me, I feel that, in poetry, we are never alone. Through our own suffering we can reach out a soothing thought and touch another\'s soul.
March 5th, 2021 09:14
dusk arising said:
Hello Silk. Poetry is a great way of expressing angst and deep emotional stuff. Here we are a mixed bag of accomplished poets and recovering souls finding release in our outpourings and the outpourings of others.
For me, I feel that, in poetry, we are never alone. Through our own suffering we can reach out a soothing thought and touch another\'s soul.
March 5th, 2021 09:14
The sun will rise on me
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sad but well expressed . Trauma is a difficult thing ... I know , because I’ve been through a lot
March 4th, 2021 03:07
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sad but well expressed . Trauma is a difficult thing ... I know , because I’ve been through a lot
March 4th, 2021 03:07
Solitary
Opal Tears said:
This is fantastic is soooo real. My heart goes out to you and I’m so proud of you for finding your inner self and strength. You deserve it. You are enough.
February 3rd, 2021 02:05
Opal Tears said:
This is fantastic is soooo real. My heart goes out to you and I’m so proud of you for finding your inner self and strength. You deserve it. You are enough.
February 3rd, 2021 02:05
Solitary
L. B. Mek said:
in the words we bequeath while choosing to share freely what wisdom we\'ve gleaned from those perplexities clouding our lives,
we choose to arm those who will one day follow our very steps, and in so doing: we help ease that angst we\'ve been carrying our adulthood\'s years of deep-end diving in shark infested waters: of our own \'choosing\'...
a wonderful read you\'ve shared dear Poet, thank you for inspiring my little scribbled reply
February 2nd, 2021 05:33
L. B. Mek said:
in the words we bequeath while choosing to share freely what wisdom we\'ve gleaned from those perplexities clouding our lives,
we choose to arm those who will one day follow our very steps, and in so doing: we help ease that angst we\'ve been carrying our adulthood\'s years of deep-end diving in shark infested waters: of our own \'choosing\'...
a wonderful read you\'ve shared dear Poet, thank you for inspiring my little scribbled reply
February 2nd, 2021 05:33
Solitary
dusk arising said:
If we all were to tell exactly \'how we are\' when asked I think the world would become a very depressed place indeed. \'I\'m OK thanks\' Is as much a defense mechanism as it is a \'I don\'t wish to discuss it with you\'.
Well expressed piece from a very personal viewpoint.
February 2nd, 2021 05:14
dusk arising said:
If we all were to tell exactly \'how we are\' when asked I think the world would become a very depressed place indeed. \'I\'m OK thanks\' Is as much a defense mechanism as it is a \'I don\'t wish to discuss it with you\'.
Well expressed piece from a very personal viewpoint.
February 2nd, 2021 05:14
Solitary
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m not sure anyone is convinced by advice (being told) by others - it has to be learnt the hard way. You seem to have cracked it, and converted that into an interesting piece of work.
February 2nd, 2021 04:22
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m not sure anyone is convinced by advice (being told) by others - it has to be learnt the hard way. You seem to have cracked it, and converted that into an interesting piece of work.
February 2nd, 2021 04:22
Solitary
orchidee said:
Good write Silk.
Ooohh, I dunno. Shall I chat with me, myself, or I? That\'s three people! heehee.
February 2nd, 2021 03:18
orchidee said:
Good write Silk.
Ooohh, I dunno. Shall I chat with me, myself, or I? That\'s three people! heehee.
February 2nd, 2021 03:18
Solitary
Goldfinch60 said:
One day that old you will return and the strength within you will lead you to the better path in your life.
Good emotive words Silk.
Andy
February 2nd, 2021 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
One day that old you will return and the strength within you will lead you to the better path in your life.
Good emotive words Silk.
Andy
February 2nd, 2021 02:07
Solitary
Poetry_Lover said:
When people ask me how I\'m doing, \"Yes, I\'m Ok\"
Wow. This hits hard. I\'m glad somebody else feels this way.
All the love- PL xx
February 2nd, 2021 00:47
Poetry_Lover said:
When people ask me how I\'m doing, \"Yes, I\'m Ok\"
Wow. This hits hard. I\'m glad somebody else feels this way.
All the love- PL xx
February 2nd, 2021 00:47
Not All Art Goes Down in History
dusk arising said:
Wow! When you do say something it has power and ... you sure know how to write and draw a reader right in.
This is really excellent writing. A must to add to my favourites.
January 30th, 2019 12:08
dusk arising said:
Wow! When you do say something it has power and ... you sure know how to write and draw a reader right in.
This is really excellent writing. A must to add to my favourites.
January 30th, 2019 12:08
Gold in the Cracks
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
wow, such a lovely and beautifully written piece of writing ... completely love this , really , well done .. this is very clever
February 8th, 2018 03:32
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
wow, such a lovely and beautifully written piece of writing ... completely love this , really , well done .. this is very clever
February 8th, 2018 03:32
Gold in the Cracks
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good strong write, may that gold within you turn to steel to make you stronger as you move forward.
February 8th, 2018 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good strong write, may that gold within you turn to steel to make you stronger as you move forward.
February 8th, 2018 02:22
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